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Once your average 15-year-old; now the son of an exiled celestial dragon and a member of the clan of D.
Will Achilles search for Wealth, Fame, and Power? Or will he be content to live on the sidelines whilst watching everything play out?
One thing is for certain, things will definitely be interesting, especially in the era of Rocks.
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*Cover Image isn’t mine
*I don’t own One Piece
*AU
I will also be posting this on royalroad.com as well once it is approved
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I read up to chapter 32 currently and gotta say it's a very good story. The author's other book is one of my favorites on this site. But that's enough about the author, let's talk about this story. The writing quality is pretty good as they are very few grammar mistakes, I noticed they are quickly fixed within a moment's notice. The author conveys what he trying to say quite easily. So you understand what he trying to do in each chapter. And the author has an editor who seems to be pretty good at his job as well. Now for the stability of updates, it's amazing. The author posts a chapter daily which is just amazing to me. For his other stories, the updates were so random. From what I could he had no schedule but for this story, it seems like he has one. So good on him for that. As for story development, to me it's perfect so far. The main character, Achilles is the son of a D and a former celestial dragon. But the main character isn't born just because of that. He doesn't have a special body like big mom but instead trains like a normal person. And so far the main character's level of strength makes sense within the world. As he isn't some sort of out-of-the-world character. He's still weak in the grand scheme of things. Also, the author flashes the characters and ideas in the story. He drops some hints and clues about certain things that will happen in the future which I appreciate. As the author isn't pulling stuff out of anywhere. As for the character design, not much to say about this part. They are good. I can't say much for the world background as it's One Piece. You can't mess it up unless you're trying to on purpose. But even then the author is adding his little twists which make sense within the world of One Piece. Which I really like as he isn't breaking the limits of the world. And that's my review which now reading it seems to be too long, lol.
Few small spoilers ahead, wont ruij your reading time but just in case those annoying runts show up i’ll put a spoiler tag. So i’ve read till chapter 27 and i can confidently say that this is a great book. First of all the update frequency, which is a 5 star since the author posts a chapter almost every day. The writing quality is also great and since the author has also written another great book (which is on a break and eventually a re-write) the quality of the story will be great, he also has an editor who did a splendid job. The story development is also great (a few small spoilers ahead) it starts with his family and some small slice of life parts while also preparing for the future and the two first crew mates are also great choices. The time era of the story is also great. The character’s APPEARANCE is based on Achilles from type-moon, but the personality and powers are very different, the mc’s fighting style is also very new and well made since it takes aspect from the one piece world even though it’s from another anime. And lastly world background, not much to be said about it since it’s the one piece world but the author managed to implement it very well.
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I will never understand how people can posts such clickbait and get away with it. When I first saw this I thought we were getting type moon character in one piece considering they have the same name and the author used the fate picture
Good story with a lot of promise I could see it continuing for a long while since there’s a lot of time and content to play with. MC background is dope and his cheat ain’t to op but is more practical making the story enjoyable. Grammar is solid and not much to say about world background since there’s plenty to work with in one piece with a decent amount being already fleshed out but with still enough unknowns that the author can take his own creative spin on it. Looking forward to future chapters and seeing what the MC will do and who he will recruit in the future.
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Honestly if you read skip the first 14 chapters. it is so boring and written horribly. The author made a lot of ominous hints for no reason the ruin the childhood arc. The parents are horrible characters too, I get this is a au but au are usually meant to be reasonable. both parents have all theee haki and are unreasonably strong and also posses stupid op devil fruits. lame. Then the mc a reincarnated person acts like a literal child not to not draw suspicion but because it’s his personality. I’ve only read to chapter 15 so it might get better but my god
This fan fiction is definitely a great one. After so many generic One Piece FFs, this feels like a breath of fresh air. Due to the pre-canon setting, there is a lot of room for creativity. So far the story is all-around good. There's adequate character growth and development. Build-ups to bigger events are mild but accurate and update schedule is uniform. Aside from that, overall, this FF is very good and I highly recommend it.
Nice improvement in the quality of writing, not that the first iteration was bad or anything. Keep up the good work. ..............
Have only read about 10 chapters so far but still a really good one piece fan fic with a lot of potential. This is my first time reading a fan fic that took place in rocks era as most of them take place in current one piece…Story is written pretty well and im excited to see whats the come! SPOILER lightning has always been one of my favorite elements and i always thought enel had one of the cooler devil fruits so its cool seeing a fan fic with that fruit
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It's not for me it has a mc with goody goody personality even after seeing his mother killing and knowing what this world has to offer him he can't even kill his enemy so yeah it's not for me this type of trash
So if its during rocks era then that means you gotta set him up with Linlin when she was skinny and hotttttt and never let her become a an ugly cow, Shakuyaku, young stussy original, and Young Tsuru she's hottt!!!!!!!!!!°_°
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A good ff overall and why i am giving 5 star 1) good character developments 2) because non - harem 3) because he is a homie 4) good and stable updates 5) mc doesnt get stupidly overpowered after each chps Has a lot of potential .. I really want to see this FF finished
the story is paced perfectly and the characters power gaining is at good speed. liking how the crew building on going can't wait to see more interaction with other charecters and see how far Achilles achievements cam take him. the fights are good but feel a bit short. spade pirates is ace group name ifk why that is bit OK and let's see how it goes. the update time is good. nice e e e ee e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e
Loving this story hope author san don’t stop updating this story I also loved other one but author san stopped updating that one plz also continue other one piece fanfiction
Good story !!, I can only ask the AUTHOR a small favor, if you have to choose a love interest for the MC (if he does not have one yet) choose between Charlotte linlin (let's not deny it, young and thin she is good), IM ( woman) or the one I would choose would be Tsuru (young) from the marines, you make her the age of the MC and fixed. Thus having a pirate-marine rivalry (incredible love-hate) !!