One Piece : Captain, We’ve Arrived at Laugh Tale

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AirheadPufferfish

i don't usually write rewievs, but i'm going to make an exception initially i continued to read because it was too op I wanted to see how the author would make this story interesting, but the name errors are too much the lion keep changing name and arlong is called dragon repeatedly even in titles, it's like the author or translator or whatever he his doesn't care, I hope he can fix this story and reply and I'll come back to read it, in the mean time I have better things to do

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beso

Thank you for the update I'm gonna follow the story hope it continuous ........................................................................................

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Veni_V

Day by day ……………..it’s going very interesting…………… keep it up…….. 👍

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Dorian_1192

The story is pretty good. It's entertaining and keeps my interest in it, the only problem is the translation isn't that good. It's better than the average MTL but the real problem is that the names of people get changed/mixed up and the TL dosent fix it. The biggest example is the lion Richie who joined the crew during the orange town arc, the lion has a different name every chapter whether it's "Luffy, Likki, Rob Lucci", etc. The lion has only been called it's actual name in probably 5 chapters throughout the entire story, which is annoying. It rarely happens to other characters but if you can ignore stuff like that then this is a decent story to read

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Patrick_Hardy

So far it good hope you won't stop translateing

So far, it's great! The story is really engaging, and I’m enjoying the characters. Hope this continues just as well . Looking forward to seeing how it unfolds!

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shshsh01

so far so good. The only problem I have is some names keep getting messed up in the translation, please fix them.

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Epsilon_Gamma

There a lot of wrong character name.....

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_MrDark

its all nice and good but man the inconsistency of the names in a chapter a character has 4 names

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FallenLancer

hi, can i have the raw for this TL.. pretty please 🥹

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Vigilante04

we want more chapters author....................................................................................................................................

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sukigta

it has no harem good enough for me😀😀😀.gg

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james_logan

Please 🙏 this is a good story but if you're going to use a Translator or an Ai assistant writer then please 🙏 double check the chapter before you post I really like the story but keep getting hung up on the incorrect names and abilities that constantly pop up. Please correct them

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Patrick_Hardy

thanks for continuing updating this hope you don't drop story right during the middle

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MrAdolfich

Not the biggest quality, but I had some laughs and I look for this more in fanfics.

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Mythic_Muse

Shameless review+1 This is one of the few books where mc doesn't know about the story, and also the fact that it is not following the plot made me do take this project Do check it

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Luca_Crimson

good work author keep it up ..........................................................................................................................

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Aikawakazu

Seperti sudah pernah baca hmmm mc yg bakalan punya anak kan sama robin 🤔 kalo iya baca lagi dah sekalian nabung novel yang lain hehehe, dan semoga aja ini novel engga berenti di tengah jalan

I’m honestly amazed by how vividly you write. Each moment feels alive, the kind of writing that instantly paints a scene in your mind. As someone who turns stories into comics and illustrations through commissions, I could immediately see yours coming to life visually. If that ever interests you, I’d love to share some ideas. You can reach me on Discord (bennett_lol) or Instagram (@eve_verse_) anytime.