One Piece: I Will Become The Pirate King!!

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Golden_dragoon

Looks good.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Dark_PersonJJ

Cool Story. I realy like how Luffy is progressing already. Gyatsu and Garp trening him together.? I just hope he will not let Nami act like she is captain how OG Luffy did. Many times she was going to far and should keep her lips shut and know her place. She is Hot and all but it do not give her right to act like she is the smartest person on the planet and that she can be wrong sometimes.

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mutekishifu

I am obliged to give this note as a sign of revolt. it's a smarter luffy with a lot of nerf and gender switching a fun read, like 3.5 or 4 stars. because I gave 1 star, if I made a list of it, it would be endless and boring, but I'll give you an example ... Calisthenics maximum level ... 300kg. My revolt is okay to nerf but that's an exaggeration. it's like I'm going to give MC the one for all of boku no hero ... after 10 years of training he reaches the supreme level ... 300kg of strength ... like world weightlifting champion Geórgio Lasha Talakhadze lifts 470kg . .. to the author if you read this, man you are in one piece world... the world of white beard that according to the author (Eiichiro Oda), is on the same level as super sayajin 1 (young white beard) from dragon ball . reading this fanfic i feel the author is an idiot or he is saying i the reader is an idiot.

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YoungMonarch

good that you write what you want i hope it will be as good as your other ff

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Drako_0692

Well, the system is a waste of time, the story is copy and paste with subtle personality changes and powers that are not worth it, the protagonist is a soup of powers when he already had his own op powers anyway nice try

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bythgr

Pretty good but author decides to ruin it by genderbending the best characters all for the sake of harem not for me.

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Shujinko_Josei

I don't get it how can you get the idea of writing this One Piece fanfic in the first place 😮‍💨. The plot story is only interesting before Luffy sets sail. Characters gender-bender is not a problem but their personality and names ruined it 👎. Since you've turned them into women, you've had to make their personalities more feminine, and their names had to change too. The plot story is another thing that you barely change. 😕 Do you know how I feel when read this ff book? It's "One Piece all over again", I rather watch One Piece anime than read this copy-paste product. 😮‍💨😠

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Lizrock

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Alchemist

Harem trash with genderbent characters and unnecessary crossover characters. 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻

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Enciridion

Another fan fiction by you. Can't wait to read this and see what's going to happen and how Luffy will develop as the story progresses. I already know It's gonna be a good one.

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Dark_Crow_Dao

the story and concept is interesting, but bad execution, we follow the same path as One Piece with the MC (Luffy), and even if he had enough time to become powerful since he has been training since he was 7 years old with a system and a powerful master but always remains weak and the worst is that he had the opportunity to learn HAKI but he did not want to learn it because it is very boring and he wanted to train techniques that are useless (he gets beaten up by the admirals), honestly i am very disappointed, and now all the crew becomes girls (gender bender), I had high expectations but it's just another Fan Fic that follows the whole process of the manga.

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Mr_mysterio

This is a copy and paste of the manga, which would be acceptable if other aspects changed, such as the charisma of the protagonist and how he behaves with his environment. unfortunately it is unfortunate too flat

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Shiro_0224

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Shujinko_Josei

Good job 👍 for ruining your One Piece fanfic book. I really don't get how can you get the idea of making this One Piece fanfic in the first place 😮‍💨. The story is only interesting before Luffy set sail. Characters gender-bender is not the problem here but their personality and names ruined it 👎. The plot story is another thing, you barely change it as if you had no motivation. If you don't want to write, don't start it. 😮‍💨😠

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Negative_Kun

Have been reading this guy fanfics for some months and all of his fanfic are top class work.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️This fanfic is another 5 ★★★★★ story made by the Author aka some_writer! 💝✨

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malik_kuan

I hope you will also change Law's gender. I hope you will also change Law's gender. I hope you will also change Law's gender. I hope you will also change Law's gender. I hope you will also change Law's gender. I hope you will also change Law's gender.

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Demon_Of_Lust

I love this story, I like how Luffy was written without much change in him other than becoming smarter and stronger than he was in canon. Keep working hard and writing what you like. I have a question for the One Piece fanfic readers, do you prefer the main characters like (Luffy Zoro Sanji...) in their female version? Or do they stay the same.[img=recommend]

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eji_agbale

Bro thanks for this fan-fic it great can't wait to read more[img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Dark_PersonJJ

Thank you for 22 chapters in 3 days.I can not wait when Luffy meets Boa Hancock.

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Dark_PersonJJ

Thank you for listening to my advice Author-kun. I will Support you along this Journey. Shishishi.