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Hello how are you thank you very much for the chapter yes more chapters come on come on more chapters come on come on
Even thought the story could use more sensory detail, overall nice pacing, pilot. Realize more chapters. I absolutely enjoyed reading ............
Update? also love the novel keep up the work even though it been 2 years on this I hope it continues👍👌. It very hard to find ones with anime summons some others are nice but still not in a part of good battles love the battle sene.
Man I don't know we get the rest it was really been nice reading it Man it's been more than a year I think author won't continue 😔 Well what can we say if the author doesn't want to continue DOES SOME ONE KNOWS A NOVEL WITH SAME STORY OR DESIGN
the writing is really good (disregarding the many moments that the event is repeated in different sentences) I don't even need to talk about the frequency... surprisingly personalities are acceptable, with boring but acceptable changes but in development this story sins too much... it's one cliche after another without any break (I stopped at chapter 40 because I saw where the story was going to end) and it's a mixture of several cliches at the same time... family betrayal; a stronger nearby realm miraculously wanting an item they don't know what it is, but which would miraculously help the mc a lot; an unexpected "girl" who is supposed to be his fiancée but who is coming because she probably wants to humiliate him; the dragon girl who appears out of nowhere from a cave he has just found and who calls him father, forcibly increasing his relationship with his sister. in the whole story, the most original was the incompetent general who loses half of his troops just when they are in danger of being invaded by barbarians... in other words: it's a piece of history, the author just had the idea and started writing without even creating an outline of the direction taken. so we see why it dropped because it's so much unnecessary drama and cliche that the author himself didn't know what to do with it. and I didn't even mention how poorly explained the fights and powers are, the A rank guy seemed much more useful in battle than AAA rank
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
The story is quite entertaining, it is a pity that it has not been updated for 1 year. T_T ..............................................................
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masterpiece, only defect was not to explain more about the geography of the world, otherwise it is a masterpiece, please author if you are still alive go back to writing this work
Does anyone know what happened to the writer, it’s been 8 months since his last update, if anyone has any idea where he is or what happened please reply or post a comment.
soo the question here when will you updating again man ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Increíble historia, me encanta como se desarrolla hasta ahora y esperó ver más aún de todo lo que está por venir, sigue adelante y continua igual
seru saya suka tapi belum update update semoga update secepatnya seru saya suka tapi belum update update semoga update secepatnya seru saya suka tapi belum update update semoga update secepatnya seru saya suka tapi belum update update semoga update secepatnya seru saya suka tapi belum update update semoga update secepatnya
I like the story....The MC is a little op but that makes the story simple which is digestible easily.... One thing I like the most about the MC is that he acts both good and bad decisively....He shows love for his family and kills his enemies readily without thinking too much about it.... As a whole a very likeable story..... Keep up the good work Author....and pls update...😭
really good. but the author stopped a while ago, still think you can read it or at least give it a try. it involve anime, system, war, and kingdom . it has a nice story and world background the only problem is that the author stopped updating.
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Bro good story................................................... Sorry for late review ✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻but i am not writing a review. I am just asking why are you not updating anymore???? ☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹ That's why i am super unhappy😞😞😞 Bro please do regular update like others
UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE
Awesome story wish it would be updated more often,why r most summons from one piece and not fairy tail or dragon balls and does he only train ninja way or are there more?
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I love this story so far, although there are some misspellings and wrong grammar I can still read it. I hope the author will give the protagonist more servant from FGO or new servant from final fantasy.
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This is amazing I live this story it has great characters and character building and is very fun to read it just excites me when I read this story and can't wait for a new chapter absolutely amazing **. I can't wait till he summons sometime acnologia or kaito.
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A pleasant and original story with an invocation system. However a quality of writing that stings the eyes if it could be improve the story would be much better.
The power system is so weak i see.......Prince is so poor?......At least he should have the gold which can buy the Town about 50 KM radius .....Weak power system is not good for future chapter like summoning Goku or Saitama to kill God or blablabla........I think you should make Strong Power System like how Gold Coin 1,000,000 is equal to 1 Nobel Coin...10,000,000 Nobel is 1 equal to Royal Coin...100,000,000 Royal Coin is equal to Saint Coin To make the world more big........Like the world he live is 1,000,000 Trilion times bigger than Earth ....And you should make Strong Power System like Warrior >Expect > Copper Knight > Silver Night > Gold Knight > Platinum Knight > Black Knight > Zero Knight > Dragon Knight > Celestial > Saint > Law Holder > Immortal > God > Supreme > Supreme God > Supreme Deity Sovereign > Universe Controller > All Being > One Above All......LoL im sure if you create Strong Base for your novel then you can write Chapter 2000++......
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this novel has enormous potential and is one of the most interesting novels I have read. I hope on the other hand that there will be no incest
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Longer chapters if possible other then that amazing work keep going and plz don't drop this I hate when authors drop good story's 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💕💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Writing Quality: 4 Stars -You might notice some misspellings throughout the whole story and some wrong grammar and many more. The reason for that is because English is not my native language. So it is very hard for me to construct a sentence as I don't know many English words. But hey, you can still read and understand it. So yeah! Updating Stability: 5 Stars -Well, I update 6-7 chapters/week. So I will shamelessly give myself a 5star. Story Development: 5 Star -Another shameless 5 stars for me. Because I like where my story is going. Character Design: 3 Star -Because I use different characters, persons or whatever you may call them that came from different sources. But some of the characters were created by that's why 3 stars. World Background: 5 Star Nothing much is known at this point in the story. But everything will be known as the story continues. You just have to wait for it.
Hello how are you thank you very much for the chapter yes more chapters come on come on more chapters come on come on
Even thought the story could use more sensory detail, overall nice pacing, pilot. Realize more chapters. I absolutely enjoyed reading ............
Update? also love the novel keep up the work even though it been 2 years on this I hope it continues👍👌. It very hard to find ones with anime summons some others are nice but still not in a part of good battles love the battle sene.
Man I don't know we get the rest it was really been nice reading it Man it's been more than a year I think author won't continue 😔 Well what can we say if the author doesn't want to continue DOES SOME ONE KNOWS A NOVEL WITH SAME STORY OR DESIGN
the writing is really good (disregarding the many moments that the event is repeated in different sentences) I don't even need to talk about the frequency... surprisingly personalities are acceptable, with boring but acceptable changes but in development this story sins too much... it's one cliche after another without any break (I stopped at chapter 40 because I saw where the story was going to end) and it's a mixture of several cliches at the same time... family betrayal; a stronger nearby realm miraculously wanting an item they don't know what it is, but which would miraculously help the mc a lot; an unexpected "girl" who is supposed to be his fiancée but who is coming because she probably wants to humiliate him; the dragon girl who appears out of nowhere from a cave he has just found and who calls him father, forcibly increasing his relationship with his sister. in the whole story, the most original was the incompetent general who loses half of his troops just when they are in danger of being invaded by barbarians... in other words: it's a piece of history, the author just had the idea and started writing without even creating an outline of the direction taken. so we see why it dropped because it's so much unnecessary drama and cliche that the author himself didn't know what to do with it. and I didn't even mention how poorly explained the fights and powers are, the A rank guy seemed much more useful in battle than AAA rank
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
The story is quite entertaining, it is a pity that it has not been updated for 1 year. T_T ..............................................................
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masterpiece, only defect was not to explain more about the geography of the world, otherwise it is a masterpiece, please author if you are still alive go back to writing this work
Does anyone know what happened to the writer, it’s been 8 months since his last update, if anyone has any idea where he is or what happened please reply or post a comment.
soo the question here when will you updating again man ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Increíble historia, me encanta como se desarrolla hasta ahora y esperó ver más aún de todo lo que está por venir, sigue adelante y continua igual
seru saya suka tapi belum update update semoga update secepatnya seru saya suka tapi belum update update semoga update secepatnya seru saya suka tapi belum update update semoga update secepatnya seru saya suka tapi belum update update semoga update secepatnya seru saya suka tapi belum update update semoga update secepatnya
I like the story....The MC is a little op but that makes the story simple which is digestible easily.... One thing I like the most about the MC is that he acts both good and bad decisively....He shows love for his family and kills his enemies readily without thinking too much about it.... As a whole a very likeable story..... Keep up the good work Author....and pls update...😭
really good. but the author stopped a while ago, still think you can read it or at least give it a try. it involve anime, system, war, and kingdom . it has a nice story and world background the only problem is that the author stopped updating.
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I hope that nothing happened to you .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. ..............................
Bro good story................................................... Sorry for late review ✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻but i am not writing a review. I am just asking why are you not updating anymore???? ☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹ That's why i am super unhappy😞😞😞 Bro please do regular update like others
UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE
Awesome story wish it would be updated more often,why r most summons from one piece and not fairy tail or dragon balls and does he only train ninja way or are there more?
Reveal Spoiler I love this story so far, although there are some misspellings and wrong grammar I can still read it. I hope the author will give the protagonist more servant from FGO or new servant from final fantasy.
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This is amazing I live this story it has great characters and character building and is very fun to read it just excites me when I read this story and can't wait for a new chapter absolutely amazing **. I can't wait till he summons sometime acnologia or kaito.
Reveal Spoiler A pleasant and original story with an invocation system. However a quality of writing that stings the eyes if it could be improve the story would be much better.
The power system is so weak i see.......Prince is so poor?......At least he should have the gold which can buy the Town about 50 KM radius .....Weak power system is not good for future chapter like summoning Goku or Saitama to kill God or blablabla........I think you should make Strong Power System like how Gold Coin 1,000,000 is equal to 1 Nobel Coin...10,000,000 Nobel is 1 equal to Royal Coin...100,000,000 Royal Coin is equal to Saint Coin To make the world more big........Like the world he live is 1,000,000 Trilion times bigger than Earth ....And you should make Strong Power System like Warrior >Expect > Copper Knight > Silver Night > Gold Knight > Platinum Knight > Black Knight > Zero Knight > Dragon Knight > Celestial > Saint > Law Holder > Immortal > God > Supreme > Supreme God > Supreme Deity Sovereign > Universe Controller > All Being > One Above All......LoL im sure if you create Strong Base for your novel then you can write Chapter 2000++......
Amazing more more more more moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore
this novel has enormous potential and is one of the most interesting novels I have read. I hope on the other hand that there will be no incest
Reveal Spoiler Longer chapters if possible other then that amazing work keep going and plz don't drop this I hate when authors drop good story's 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💕💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Writing Quality: 4 Stars -You might notice some misspellings throughout the whole story and some wrong grammar and many more. The reason for that is because English is not my native language. So it is very hard for me to construct a sentence as I don't know many English words. But hey, you can still read and understand it. So yeah! Updating Stability: 5 Stars -Well, I update 6-7 chapters/week. So I will shamelessly give myself a 5star. Story Development: 5 Star -Another shameless 5 stars for me. Because I like where my story is going. Character Design: 3 Star -Because I use different characters, persons or whatever you may call them that came from different sources. But some of the characters were created by that's why 3 stars. World Background: 5 Star Nothing much is known at this point in the story. But everything will be known as the story continues. You just have to wait for it.