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I mean the novel are not really good but enjoyable for me that is........................................................................... .
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Good novel but can you plese post anotyer chapter than 1 chapter per 2 week 😭😭 i need more chapter but i can't pay for patron :(. I vert like this novel because the MC are op and his developpement is good
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Ok, this is my honest opinion, this story is mostly wish fulfillment, so don't expect it to be too serious. MC is an overpowered asshole, he's evil as hell, and shame is not in his vocabulary. However, his actions are justified as he was betrayed by his best friend early in the story, as well as by the his whole school, his only real companions being his family. Also, this story is not for pure souls, it's like if you combined Hueco Mundo, Hell, Gehenna, and the Goblins from Goblin Slayer. MC rapes a girl within the first ten chapters, while making her boyfriend rape himself. I repeat, rape himself. I know, it's ****ed up. In all honesty, it is a pretty good novel, and I recommend reading this. For most people who read Ghosty's stories, this is amazing.
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This is a great story I wish you would continue it but I understand if you would not this is just a great story they were novels like this before but the author dropped it or got reported pls continue but I understand if you will not if you do read this thank you.
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Autor-san, só tirando uma dúvida que eu acho que muitas leitores de primeira viagem como eu tem, pois as revisões estão muito confusas e dizem que há muito spams, então eu quero perguntar diretamente a você. Fiquei sabendo que você reescreveu o romance por quê rolou netorare que quase ninguém gosta, pois a maioria de nós, leitores, somos hipócritas e gosta de netori e abomina netorare(eu, por exemplo), mas ainda ouvir que ainda tem netorare rolando(pode ser spam), então queria perguntar diretamente a você para acabar logo com minha dúvida e de muitos irmãos, para que possamos ler seu romance sem medo e preocupação: Tem NETORARE nesse romance? ________________________________________ Author-san, just taking a question that I think many first-time readers like me have, because the reviews are very confusing and say there are a lot of spams, so I want to ask you directly. I understand that you rewrote the novel why rolled netorare that almost nobody likes, because most of us readers are hypocrites and like netori and abhor netorare (me, for example) but still hear that there is still netorare rolling (may be spam), so I would like to ask you directly to get rid of my doubt and many brothers so we can read your novel without fear and worry: Is there NETORARE in this novel?
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Good concept but the worlds that the mc went to were so ****. Like how boring for an all godlike supreme deity powerhouse to go to a weak ass world such as shield hero. It was such a disappointment there like he could’ve gone to opm or marvel and dc
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I dont give a perfect score but this is the highest i can give. Its new and exciting although lots of *** and harem but promising. I strongly suggest to the author to build the story and expand it so that people will not be bored with just *** alone. I like this novel and hope for more updates! Aja!!!
With continuous writing practices, you can improve further. Much effort needed for grammar, story telling skill and descriptions of a scene. Kudos for creativity tho. Much room for improvement. Don’t give up and continue to strive!
Self to my surprise the story turned out very well however there's a lot of chapters that you never removed just updates it doesn't really count as a story it makes no fuxing sense im highly irritated it ruined the story it shows u dont care u just want a bs chapter count Fix it n maybe ill remove this
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The starting is okay but kinda depressing to read after he got the system. If you gonna create a new work of the same genre, better focus on a few characters and develop them first instead of throwing them all in one because it's kinda confusing. Not everyone remember each of them and sometimes it's kinda pain to switch to your browser to search for a certain character. As for character development, plan ahead. Avoid pointless monologues unless you wanna make look your character like that. Great example of this is your MC rants a lot but ends up not doing it. Of course he have his reasons but it's better to do it in one or two statements that includes the "goal" and "reasons" if ever you gonna delay that goal instead of just building a lot of emotions for your character that will not gonna be used. In this way, readers who are immerse will not waste time setting up their mood for nothing.
Its good for a time pass.ashjsjsgshsbjsjshsjsbsbshshjsjshsjsjsjsjksngsmhhbsbsmkskskhsvnmajsjsbdbbbdjjsjbbksjsja should absolutely haha HHS Jha JJ's she's just the Anja Anja Suja Anja Akshay Anja Suja Suja Suja ajakeijjw where I heard keep eke the he eke the he was j.
It's a very good story with a properly OP character who has actual emotions, not some easygoing one. The Harem system and the God System idea is
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I mean the novel are not really good but enjoyable for me that is........................................................................... .
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Good novel but can you plese post anotyer chapter than 1 chapter per 2 week 😭😭 i need more chapter but i can't pay for patron :(. I vert like this novel because the MC are op and his developpement is good
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Reveal Spoiler Ok, this is my honest opinion, this story is mostly wish fulfillment, so don't expect it to be too serious. MC is an overpowered asshole, he's evil as hell, and shame is not in his vocabulary. However, his actions are justified as he was betrayed by his best friend early in the story, as well as by the his whole school, his only real companions being his family. Also, this story is not for pure souls, it's like if you combined Hueco Mundo, Hell, Gehenna, and the Goblins from Goblin Slayer. MC rapes a girl within the first ten chapters, while making her boyfriend rape himself. I repeat, rape himself. I know, it's ****ed up. In all honesty, it is a pretty good novel, and I recommend reading this. For most people who read Ghosty's stories, this is amazing.
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This is a great story I wish you would continue it but I understand if you would not this is just a great story they were novels like this before but the author dropped it or got reported pls continue but I understand if you will not if you do read this thank you.
Reveal Spoiler Autor-san, só tirando uma dúvida que eu acho que muitas leitores de primeira viagem como eu tem, pois as revisões estão muito confusas e dizem que há muito spams, então eu quero perguntar diretamente a você. Fiquei sabendo que você reescreveu o romance por quê rolou netorare que quase ninguém gosta, pois a maioria de nós, leitores, somos hipócritas e gosta de netori e abomina netorare(eu, por exemplo), mas ainda ouvir que ainda tem netorare rolando(pode ser spam), então queria perguntar diretamente a você para acabar logo com minha dúvida e de muitos irmãos, para que possamos ler seu romance sem medo e preocupação: Tem NETORARE nesse romance? ________________________________________ Author-san, just taking a question that I think many first-time readers like me have, because the reviews are very confusing and say there are a lot of spams, so I want to ask you directly. I understand that you rewrote the novel why rolled netorare that almost nobody likes, because most of us readers are hypocrites and like netori and abhor netorare (me, for example) but still hear that there is still netorare rolling (may be spam), so I would like to ask you directly to get rid of my doubt and many brothers so we can read your novel without fear and worry: Is there NETORARE in this novel?
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Good concept but the worlds that the mc went to were so ****. Like how boring for an all godlike supreme deity powerhouse to go to a weak ass world such as shield hero. It was such a disappointment there like he could’ve gone to opm or marvel and dc
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I dont give a perfect score but this is the highest i can give. Its new and exciting although lots of *** and harem but promising. I strongly suggest to the author to build the story and expand it so that people will not be bored with just *** alone. I like this novel and hope for more updates! Aja!!!
With continuous writing practices, you can improve further. Much effort needed for grammar, story telling skill and descriptions of a scene. Kudos for creativity tho. Much room for improvement. Don’t give up and continue to strive!
Self to my surprise the story turned out very well however there's a lot of chapters that you never removed just updates it doesn't really count as a story it makes no fuxing sense im highly irritated it ruined the story it shows u dont care u just want a bs chapter count Fix it n maybe ill remove this
Reveal Spoiler The starting is okay but kinda depressing to read after he got the system. If you gonna create a new work of the same genre, better focus on a few characters and develop them first instead of throwing them all in one because it's kinda confusing. Not everyone remember each of them and sometimes it's kinda pain to switch to your browser to search for a certain character. As for character development, plan ahead. Avoid pointless monologues unless you wanna make look your character like that. Great example of this is your MC rants a lot but ends up not doing it. Of course he have his reasons but it's better to do it in one or two statements that includes the "goal" and "reasons" if ever you gonna delay that goal instead of just building a lot of emotions for your character that will not gonna be used. In this way, readers who are immerse will not waste time setting up their mood for nothing.
Its good for a time pass.ashjsjsgshsbjsjshsjsbsbshshjsjshsjsjsjsjksngsmhhbsbsmkskskhsvnmajsjsbdbbbdjjsjbbksjsja should absolutely haha HHS Jha JJ's she's just the Anja Anja Suja Anja Akshay Anja Suja Suja Suja ajakeijjw where I heard keep eke the he eke the he was j.
It's a very good story with a properly OP character who has actual emotions, not some easygoing one. The Harem system and the God System idea is
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Aye an author who fights back against trolls? I like that hahaahahahahaaha