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Dongxue has every right to leave, she had children with him when she was out of memory, it was basically rape, as the friend quoted in another comment. Now this arrogant mc who acts as a manipulative bastard wants to force her to stay with a husband she doesn't love? What a hypocrisy. He also said how much he hates beta protagonists, but he's much worse , between being a beta protagonist and a heartless bastard manipulator, it's easy to see which one is the worst. View More
Harem God of Origin (ATG) · C37
21 hours ago
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Harem God of Origin (ATG) · C37
21 hours ago
Reading Status: C37
He is 3 years old, but has the mind of an *****, and he is having perverted thoughts with maid that will breastfeed him, even playing sexually with her, this is very sick and repulsive in my opinion. He is still 3 years old, traveling to the kingdoms of the gods, manipulating these women into his harem, women in that type of novel who are known to be extremely proud and arrogant are treating a 3 fucking year kid seriously and even falling in love. for him with almost no previous interaction. He uses the other-timeline memories, in the case of memories of Yun Che with these girls, to manipulate and make them think he has a relationship at another timeline, and the women simply agree, they show zero emotions, empty women. Not to mention that the pace of history is slow, the interactions are meaningless, does a 3 year old simply go to another realm to look for women for his harem? I thought Yun Che was a pussy beta, but this guy is a thousand times worse. The story has no evolution and are boring to read. This story is probably a comedy story because it is impossible to be a serious story. You can't even read this story as a pastime of how unbelievable her events are, really the whole story is meaningless mc is an arrogant, manipulative, hypocryte, a heartless bastard who keeps manipulating everything and everyone, see how he forced Xia Qinyue's mother to stay in the lower realm, if I thought Yun Che was a cruel and perverted hypocrite, this other character is just a piece of **** as a person. The grammar and upade rate of this romance are good, but the rest makes the story impossible to read. View More
Harem God of Origin (ATG)
21 hours ago
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Harem God of Origin (ATG)
21 hours ago
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Harem God of Origin (ATG)
21 hours ago
WTF! They are simply taking a 3 years child seriously. The mc is 3 years old, does not care about cultivating and grow stronger, and like a retarded without any power he come to the kingdoms of the gods to manipulate women to his harem. View More
Harem God of Origin (ATG) · C29
21 hours ago
Mc acts so pussy! Worse than Yun Che himself! Hahahahaha View More
Harem God of Origin (ATG) · C29
22 hours ago
Reading Status: C139
Well, this is my opinion
The mc is extremely nerfed constantly to the point of being defeated by a human. He is supposed to have the heart / soul of Ashura, which are basically incarnations of war, master of combat, and he doesn't even know how to fight straight yet !!! And even though he's from the upper realm with insanely powerful parents, he evolves slower than the xianxia-cultivated novel characters.

Dialogues have no emotion,are emotionless, they are simply text, they pass nothing. It still pisses me off that he saves Kuroka and asks Shirone to become Rias's servant, and she has even more potential than Kuroka herself. Another annoying fact is that mc should always interact with the gremory family, never another, always them, this is cliche to the max, another cliche is he always interact with one of the 3 factions, he could simply get closer to the Shinto faction or even the Hindu, the fact that he became Azazel's foster child literally "destroyed" the story for me. Not to mention that mc doesn't evolve into anything, emotionally, physically, or anything, it's still the same. History has evolved almost nothing in all of these chapters.

And as hell a dragon lineage of ice and fire has more potential power than dragons that can duplicate and divide power infinitely, others that are conceptual beings like dream and infinity. Even if the novel has concepts of cultivation, its having power based on ice and fire is nowhere near these other dragons, Maybe that's why he's so weak compared to other dragons., it remains weak even though it is from a divine realm.

Now about grammar I can not give much opinion, English is not my first language and I am not fluent in it. Although I find some grammatical errors I still find the story very readable. The refresh rate was also good so far, that the romance is stalled. But in short away, if you like a story Little elaborate and without compromise or plot building and character growth, read this story, otherwise not. View More
Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System
1 day ago
Dropped? View More
Showing power to catch girls · C22
6 days ago
Reading Status: C49
The same kind of cliche and harem genre story that exists on this website.
1- The personagen has a ****ty personality, no, better to say that he doesn't even have a personality, looks like a robot, accepts that he was reincarnated so easily. He has a masochistic tendency, simply he never tires of being beaten by women. He walks around "helping" people and showing off for no reason. It's easy to manipulate as it shows how demons and fallen angels manipulate him, even his own women can simply force their opinion on him, or force him to do something. Relations with his women are vague and without real emotion, they relationships are empty!
2- The world background fund sucks he goes to other worlds and reunited girls for his harem, and he doesn't even have a decent relationship with the ones he already has. He goes into a world he already has knowledge of and doesn't tend to change almost anything. He lets things happen. He stays so little time in the world that he doesn't even have enough time to make a story. It's all monotone and empty. His obsession with girls is disgusting (nothing against a harem novel, just write a good one). Well, that's it, if you like history without real construction, and made for jack off only, this story is that kind.
3- The existing characters beyond the oc, do not have their personality correctly written, they are basically personalities created by the writer of this novel, characters acting against the original personalities, simply have only the original name the rest is ooc. The girls are totally submissive and empty, they fall in love with him for no reason, almost instantly. Totally ridiculous in my opinion!
Well that's it, same thing as almost every other story that a guy dies and reincarnates into another world, he goes to new worlds "reaps" a harem of empty and emotionless girls who are totally submissive to him, and who like to spank He sometimes. The character always has to stay together and help / train the group of "good guys" from that world, while showing everyone how cool and powerful he is! (Sarcasm)
And also this whole Japanese honorific thing, san, kun, chan ... It's just too boring! He doesn't have to talk like that every place, it seems that every place and world he goes to, the people only speak Japanese, it's sucks! View More
Fantasy Cosmos System
6 days ago
Reading Status: C0
Hard to read, bad grammar. The novel simply does not "move forward" has no development, nothing, like 0%! The only good thing about this story is the regular rate of update. View More
TRAVELLING THROUGH HIS PHONE(DXD to ATG every world)
1 week ago
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A new life in High School DXD · C66
1 week ago
It seems that the story was abandoned, since it no chapter in so long. View More

godofancient: Continuing?????
Plz say yes

A new life in High School DXD · C163
3 weeks ago
Has the story been abandoned? View More
A new life in High School DXD · C163
1 month ago
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A new life in High School DXD · C163
1 month ago
thanks for the chapter View More
Slayer of Babylon · C31
1 month ago

Ralph_Freedman: Dude,you are doing the same thing,which made viewers hate original DxD and write fan-fic with a decent a Mc,you are not adding comedy you are making Mc a pervert.

Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System · C101
1 month ago

ShiningOne: Even if the you don't look at Mc's personality the chapter's quality is low.I mean the same reason i didn't like about original dxd,you got so much of a Great concept of a supernatural world.yet,you ruin it with perverted materials.I don't have anything against harem or sex infact i want that but development of romance is very poor in that.

Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System · C93
1 month ago
Reading Status: C44
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I Will Be The Harem King
1 month ago
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I Will Be The Harem King
1 month ago
thanks for the chapter View More
God succession system · C216
1 month ago
thanks for the chapter View More
God succession system · C214
1 month ago
Even if it was created for fun, it could have been done better, in my opinion. View More

MilkGod: Ok, first thing is the MC wanted to look like Dante from DMC not be him, also gaining his weapons. 2nd grammar is ok, only mistakes I've found so far are the uses of him, she, they, when talking about characters. (Narrative view.) 3rd Author said they do this for fun.

Dante in DXD
1 month ago
In fact, it's been a long time since he published a chapter. I just hope he doesn't drop the story, I like her very much. View More

Dat_Guy: Love you author, but I just wanna ask when’s the next chapter coming out?

A new life in High School DXD · C163
1 month ago
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A new life in High School DXD · C163
2 months ago
Only now that I saw your comment. I didn't know this story is plagiarized. View More

TranquilPanda: Read my comment please. You're giving the credit and praises to the wrong person.

bññnn
2 months ago
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bññnn
2 months ago
I'm talking about his light novel version, where he fights against the god slayer. View More

ShiningOne: there are world destroying level opponent in upper realm. izayoi could be defeated if opponent are
physically stronger than him.‌‌‌and about izayoi destroying stars the starts in his anime aren't huge gigantic celestial bodies.

Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System · C77
2 months ago
I forgot about the upper realm, I thought I'd read this in some xianxia not in this fanfic hahahaha novel. People in the upper realm have to be too strong to need someone like Izayoi as an ally. View More

ShiningOne: Strong allies is what he needs for higher world

Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System · C77
2 months ago
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