parelel world traveler

LV 2

Shaine_chan

First and foremost, I like the idea set in the story. It is intriguing but the writing quality could be better. The author needs to work on the proper use of punctuation and consistency in POV. BUt then again, it's too early to leave a review for the character design, stability of updates and story development. One thing is for sure, this story has great potential. Job well done Author!

LV 4

Patience_Agboola

The book is good and I want more so keep it up

LV 1

gamer_souf

I like it cuz I am the auteur heheheheehehh

LV 1

Tifala

The idea is interesting, but it would not hurt to highlight the dialogues through - or ". It is difficult to judge by one chapter. But I hope the author will continue to develop the plot.