Enagaging plot development which allow characters to develop with a variety of interactions along the way. Very engaging dialogue with just enough action to keep your RPG readers occupied. Would have liked to see even more development (eg.where did they come from, how did they get to "here", motivations, goals in life, that sort of ilk) of the surrounding characters, Ashley, Dani, Val, and especially Scraps and Ember, as they seem to be key enablers. Love the overall storyline! Bravo!
Enagaging plot development which allow characters to develop with a variety of interactions along the way. Very engaging dialogue with just enough action to keep your RPG readers occupied. Would have liked to see even more development (eg.where did they come from, how did they get to "here", motivations, goals in life, that sort of ilk) of the surrounding characters, Ashley, Dani, Val, and especially Scraps and Ember, as they seem to be key enablers. Love the overall storyline! Bravo!