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LilithFe

Still waiting for the author to announce why roy has the program and why he is obsessed with killing that person. There are a bit too many characters and complicated relationships, and I often struggled to remember the names of various fictional characters to keep going. Need to go back and read it all over again.

If you were given a chance to go back in time, what moment of your life would you choose to go back to? Why would you want to go back to that moment?"

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Melody_YUE

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Sometimes I think it is not necessarily to read a lot of books, their level can be improved, really improve their own attitude to technology, many times learning is not technology, but a kind of their own ideas, when they can not even master the inner thoughts, it is simply not to talk about improving. Well, I will now talk about the book's perception, the difficulty of integrating network literature into mainstream literature, lies in the absence of literary critics, lies in the confusion of measurement standards, for a long time, literary critics of network literature collective aphasia, until the last year or two, many critics active in the field of literary criticism, only began to establish the evaluation system of network literature, it is rare that they quickly grasp the It is rare that they quickly grasp the charming kernel of network literature, and give high evaluation and high hopes to network literature. With the establishment of the theoretical system of network literature and the continuous improvement of network literature in terms of creative standards, it is clear that network literature has become the mainstream of mainstream literature, and we look forward to seeing more works of network literature selected.

The essay switches on and off with feelings and ends with feelings. This makes the essay consistent and coherent, and at the same time, makes the theme of the essay repeat, which is highly infectious.

In the face of hardship, Roy did not give up his hope for life, he appreciated the first rays of the morning sun and cheered himself up.[img=coins]

not good english,but i can see you have tried to writing a story,try more hard.i belive you can do better next time. the story need more patients to read.

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BenjaminG

When it comes to reading experience, in fact, each person has their own reading interests and habits, here are some of my or from the teacher or their own summary of the experience. 　　 In our time, the book that can be published is basically everyone's book, even so there is a distinction, some books do have a taste to read. For example, Chen Yinqian's book, although it is very difficult to read, all kinds of historical materials look very boring, but very thoughtful, it is easy to be attracted to keep reading, and finally read and understand. I have read many of Chen Yinkean's books many times and made many notes. 　　 Reading your books is like standing on the shoulders of your predecessors, so that you can go one step further. When we do scholarship, we have to go up from the highest point of the previous generation. It is quick to read other articles based on reading everyone's writings, and it is easy to see what is repeated, what is fried, and what is improved ......

First taboo: no matter how beautifully written, don't let description bring your narrative to a halt. The author of a novel must keep this in mind: don't over-describe anything, whether it's the Tetons, the sunset, or the zebras on Waikiki Beach. Otherwise, the strength of your narrative is going to suffer.

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Waiting is also a kind of faith, the sea of love is too deep, time is too shallow, the autumn night withered in the fallen leaves soaked sky, yellow world little by little with the wind and gradually far away.

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Melody_YUE

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