/ Fantasy / Planetary Merger
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One day Blake and his sister ryoka was teleported in a medival world and after that their whole world got teleported on another continent of that same world, read the journey of Blake and ryoka
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The world and character designs are good. This story has good potential for development. I think it would be interesting reading. The only thing that prevents me from fully enjoying the story is the poor writing quality and the few chapters. I hope that the author can improve these with time.
The plot seems good tho you need to really work on your grammar there is something off in every few lines im not sure its possible tho try something like AI that might fix those
Author shameless review:- its my first work and tried to form a story with a nice story and many peoples will think of it as a child story but it s not a child story wait 30 chapters