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It doesn't seem like the story is ongoing anymore. I think the author given up or couldn't find the time to write so the story might be on pause or maybe dropped already
This want bad for your first fanfic, keep trying to do better so that you can improve. People will.sipport you the father you go, and don't be afraid to make mistakes
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I really enjoy reading this novel, keep up good work 0w0)/~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Good book but will expect to produce more chapters But very good book,zachy and you should also add some more characters,who would accompany Zach
liked the story but where are the updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
good story but too slow chapter updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is an amazing fanfic i refer other readers To read this fanfic Story development is quite good and overall 5 stars id a mist from me in the aspect of this beautiful story of author. Thanks for author to create such a good piece And please continue your novel it has greate potential Anyways thanks for the fanfic
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This was soooooooo soooooooo sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
liked very much but it could use a beta o editor to polish some the chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great story, don't drop it. ................................................... ..................................................... ......................................................
For the moment it's pretty good. I recommend for someone searching a good pokemon fanfiction....... ..................... ........ ...........
Good story, release a chapter every day.... some words are repeated and some wordings meanings are hard to understand, give an annexure at the end for it
Newbie author here... Thank you for all the readers support... Do enjoy the story.. Just giving out high five to myself.. Please do give a review once you feel like... Nothing much...
Love this novel. The details and Grammer are on point. I would recommend you guys to read it. What are you waiting for go read it!!! ****************************************
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This story really has great potential being a prequel to other Pokémon versions. It also have a unique story background which keeps you hooked up!
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Reveal Spoiler It doesn't seem like the story is ongoing anymore. I think the author given up or couldn't find the time to write so the story might be on pause or maybe dropped already
This want bad for your first fanfic, keep trying to do better so that you can improve. People will.sipport you the father you go, and don't be afraid to make mistakes
Reveal Spoiler I really enjoy reading this novel, keep up good work 0w0)/~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Good book but will expect to produce more chapters But very good book,zachy and you should also add some more characters,who would accompany Zach
liked the story but where are the updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
good story but too slow chapter updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is an amazing fanfic i refer other readers To read this fanfic Story development is quite good and overall 5 stars id a mist from me in the aspect of this beautiful story of author. Thanks for author to create such a good piece And please continue your novel it has greate potential Anyways thanks for the fanfic
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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This was soooooooo soooooooo sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
liked very much but it could use a beta o editor to polish some the chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great story, don't drop it. ................................................... ..................................................... ......................................................
For the moment it's pretty good. I recommend for someone searching a good pokemon fanfiction....... ..................... ........ ...........
Good story, release a chapter every day.... some words are repeated and some wordings meanings are hard to understand, give an annexure at the end for it
Newbie author here... Thank you for all the readers support... Do enjoy the story.. Just giving out high five to myself.. Please do give a review once you feel like... Nothing much...
Love this novel. The details and Grammer are on point. I would recommend you guys to read it. What are you waiting for go read it!!! ****************************************
.................................................................................................................................................................
This story really has great potential being a prequel to other Pokémon versions. It also have a unique story background which keeps you hooked up!
,,,, ,,,,,,, , ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, , ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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