MrE
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I Cant Miss !!!
4.3
Eazy at 50years old woke up one day in his ten year old body happy about getting another chance at life. He gets info that he has three abilities. This is my first time writing so I'm going to wing things as it comes to my mind please bare with me. Please point out any Grammer errors. PS. THIS NOVEL IS NOT FOR THE WEAK HEART AND ITS NOT ALL SUNSHINE EVERYDAY THE MC WILL HAVE BAD DAYS SO IF YOU NOT READY TO SEE A MC TAKE A L PLEASE DO NOT READ.
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Legendary Shadow
4.5
Liam dies and is sent to the world of Pokemon with all his memories of his previous life as a Pokemon geek. Join him in his journey as he gets a never before seen legendary Pokemon egg as his starter..... WARNING!!! New Author here. Mind the grammar. Another thing is that this is my First time writing a novel and my First FanFic, just trying here out new stuff. ---------- I would love if you could point out the misspelling or other errors. ---------- This novel is not based on the original series so please don't bust my bubble when something doesn't go according to it. Disclaimer: I don't own "POKEMON" or any of the characters or content from novels/mangas/animes/games. Every rite belongs to the main Author/Creators. Disclaimer: I don't own the Cover Image. Got it from Pinterest. If the artist needed it to be taken down Inform me. Support The Aurthor so I can give you guys more heat. https://www.paypal.me/EBentum
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Up And Above
Old Testament Support The Aurthor so I can give you guys more heat. https://www.paypal.me/EBentum
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Life's Happiness
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WORLD ENDERS(DROPPED)
In the year 2020 a mysterious Meteorite strikes the Earth putting half the population into a coma for a week and when they finally woke up something strange was going on with their body. Join Felicia Boju on her journey to survive and become the strongest in this new world. New writer if there is any Grammer errors please point them out so I can fix them. Thank You All For The Support Support The Aurthor so I can give you guys more heat. https://www.paypal.me/EBentum
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Felicia's Corner
Felicia comes up with random stories for kids to enjoy!!!! She's my daughter and only six so don't mind the grammar for now.
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Draggggg
Drazon was born a strange dragon in his clan. He grew up shone by the other dragon clans members. Watch as Drazon embarks on a special journey to finger out this world that even his powerful clans members are scared to venture into.
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Drazon
Drazon was born a strange dragon in his clan. He grew up shone by the other dragon clans members. Watch as Drazon embarks on a special journey to finger out this world that even his powerful clans members are scared to venture into. This will be a slow release novel
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sp4rt4n_ii7: Paragraphs would help this story immensely. Right now I feel like it is way too disjointed.
I Cant Miss !!! · C3
Thats_a_sexy_name: I like the concept of the story, but what I don't like is that the story is so fast paced that the main character doesn't get to develop. Seriously, the only develop that the character has, that I have read up to (chapter 13), is that he loses his virginity in a reverse raping with his shadow Lugia watching; he steals the Pokemon of the people whom he had sex with and there are some mentions in their about fights, that aren't gym fights, that have occurred that make his Pokemon, and the ones he has stolen, stronger. Yes, his sexual partners were apart of team rocket and they got sent to jail but if, what I think is, the main reason that the author does it is to just give them back their pokemon and make the now ex-team rocket members become a part of his harem you'd think that it should be more romantic.
The main character gets a shadow Lugia that has multiple typings, the type that I am annoyed at is the devil typing. It doesn't belong in the Pokemon world, even if it is a fanfic of the franchise, you might as well expand into the ghost or dark typing; the creativity someone can use on these is phenomenal and could carry the same effects that a "devil" type has. The story is also mainly in third person, which annoys me, but I still read as I hope that it gets better. As a small sidenote, I like how Ash is more level headed and mature, mentally, than the Ash seen in the anime.
The last subject of my annoyance is that the world has a level system like the one seen in the games, which is fine, but it still annoys and confused me none the less as I assume that this is meant to be a more realistic version / interpretation of the Pokemon world. I know that levels are mentioned in the anime but I still think that it is annoying.
P.S
If your thinking of replying with something along the lines of "Well if you don't like it write your own novel" or "(insert grammatical correction here)" or "expand on the thing you said about (insert topic here) and give an example" only to just shut me down, don't waste either your own, mine or other's time as this is an opinion and not fact. Also, I know that I haven't read much of the story but I felt like writing a review and, even though it is mean to say, I don't care for your opinion of me or my opinion on this subject. If the story or the quality of work improves then that is fantastic and I will continue to read and, if I feel like it, delete this review. This is just an opinion and even though it may, or can, hurt feelings, at the end of the day I am but one reviewer that doesn't see or feel completely what the other more positive people see in this story. It doesn't matter much what I think as the Author is going to do their work their way, they may change something due to a suggestion but something will only change if they want it to change. Good bye and I hope that this story continues and the Author doesn't take this to heart, that may be impossible but I still wish that the negative parts don't affect them. My opinion may change in the future but for now this is it.Legendary Shadow
Thats_a_sexy_name: I like the concept of the story, but what I don't like is that the story is so fast paced that the main character doesn't get to develop. Seriously, the only develop that the character has, that I have read up to (chapter 13), is that he loses his virginity in a reverse raping with his shadow Lugia watching; he steals the Pokemon of the people whom he had sex with and there are some mentions in their about fights, that aren't gym fights, that have occurred that make his Pokemon, and the ones he has stolen, stronger. Yes, his sexual partners were apart of team rocket and they got sent to jail but if, what I think is, the main reason that the author does it is to just give them back their pokemon and make the now ex-team rocket members become a part of his harem you'd think that it should be more romantic.
The main character gets a shadow Lugia that has multiple typings, the type that I am annoyed at is the devil typing. It doesn't belong in the Pokemon world, even if it is a fanfic of the franchise, you might as well expand into the ghost or dark typing; the creativity someone can use on these is phenomenal and could carry the same effects that a "devil" type has. The story is also mainly in third person, which annoys me, but I still read as I hope that it gets better. As a small sidenote, I like how Ash is more level headed and mature, mentally, than the Ash seen in the anime.
The last subject of my annoyance is that the world has a level system like the one seen in the games, which is fine, but it still annoys and confused me none the less as I assume that this is meant to be a more realistic version / interpretation of the Pokemon world. I know that levels are mentioned in the anime but I still think that it is annoying.
P.S
If your thinking of replying with something along the lines of "Well if you don't like it write your own novel" or "(insert grammatical correction here)" or "expand on the thing you said about (insert topic here) and give an example" only to just shut me down, don't waste either your own, mine or other's time as this is an opinion and not fact. Also, I know that I haven't read much of the story but I felt like writing a review and, even though it is mean to say, I don't care for your opinion of me or my opinion on this subject. If the story or the quality of work improves then that is fantastic and I will continue to read and, if I feel like it, delete this review. This is just an opinion and even though it may, or can, hurt feelings, at the end of the day I am but one reviewer that doesn't see or feel completely what the other more positive people see in this story. It doesn't matter much what I think as the Author is going to do their work their way, they may change something due to a suggestion but something will only change if they want it to change. Good bye and I hope that this story continues and the Author doesn't take this to heart, that may be impossible but I still wish that the negative parts don't affect them. My opinion may change in the future but for now this is it.Legendary Shadow
IamMrBlack: 2nd ability, can’t get tired while playing any sports. Wtf why his arms aching.
Thats the sign of tirednessI Cant Miss !!! · C2
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ChuLiWooChen27: That's it. I'm dropping it too.. maybe I will go back to see a chapter.. but I don't like it anymore as much as I did.. Author, I respect your power to change and do whatever you want, but you fuc*ed up the novel. It didn't make sense at all. It isn't because it's a fantasy novel that it can happen like that. Doesn't makes sense at all. It's too heartbreaking seeing it develop like this..
I Cant Miss !!! · C92
RzeTY: Wtf is this **** lol fight hand to hand he is a basket ball player author keeps doing same **** every 30 chapters first time injury now a guy that can counter him lol.
I Cant Miss !!! · C90
Leelah_Nyeswah: I finished reading through all the comments and I see that you guys are really mad about how Eazy lost. Last chapter I suggested that Aki should have powers and the author himself said that he never said Aki was normal. So he might just have powers. And I know you guys don't like when MCs lose and how this chapter went. But for me I think it wasn't that big of a deal. It's not like Eazy isn't going to destroy him in basketball. If I were anybody here that was mad and wanted to leave, I would reconsider after reading this and the next chapter. I'm sure that MrE is going to make sure Eazy wins it might not look that way right now but trust me it will. And there is a probability that Eazy and Aki will have a hand-to-hand combat rematch. I also feel that it's kinda my fault for suggesting that Aki should have powers. Sorry for anybody that's mad but please reconsider reading at least another chapter.
I Cant Miss !!! · C90
MysticDaCrazy1: I know this is about the up's and Down's of life... As the greater message but having someone that perfectly counters your protagonist, who happens to be a cheat code, didn't make sense... I still have my stone as I have faith that this makes sense in the long run... Plus it's entertaining to see that you realize you needed an antagonist
I Cant Miss !!! · C90
Jasonenrick: Bro it is not about Defeat, it is about that it does not make Sense .
It is like LeBron James losing vs a 8 year old kid losing in boxing .....no sense .
A person who can look in the future , can freeze the time , has a peak human body and did have a black belt in martial arts is losing against a normal martial arts guy who comes out of nowhere !
Srry but it does not make sense .
I kow that your Novel is unpredictable and i love that .
But i can't keep wasting my money on Stuff like this .
I hope the Best for u but for me ( and many other people ) it is like getting sparta kicked in cliff from my mother ;(I Cant Miss !!! · C90
Jasonenrick: Bro it is not about Defeat, it is about that it does not make Sense .
It is like LeBron James losing vs a 8 year old kid losing in boxing .....no sense .
A person who can look in the future , can freeze the time , has a peak human body and did have a black belt in martial arts is losing against a normal martial arts guy who comes out of nowhere !
Srry but it does not make sense .
I kow that your Novel is unpredictable and i love that .
But i can't keep wasting my money on Stuff like this .
I hope the Best for u but for me ( and many other people ) it is like getting sparta kicked in cliff from my mother ;(I Cant Miss !!! · C90
lucifer_brightest: Still false advertisement
I Cant Miss !!! · C12
RzeTY: Wtf is this **** lol fight hand to hand he is a basket ball player author keeps doing same **** every 30 chapters first time injury now a guy that can counter him lol.
I Cant Miss !!! · C90
Jasonenrick: DROP!
For real i love this Novel but this was absolut SHIT
it makes absolut no sense .
He has a time freeze ability !!!!TIME FREEZ
There isn't a way someone can move in there .
And with Emperor:s Eye you can predict where he can punch .
I didn't even read more then to the Point where he lost the Fight .
Sorry but this is one hell of a **** Chapter .
I really hope i never would have spend my Money on this if i knew it would continue like this .I Cant Miss !!! · C90
Jojo_Banks: Yeah... don’t get why he’s suddenly limited. You should have started with that earlier on rather than him suddenly having a limited amount of perfect shots.... sigh, plot holes already
I Cant Miss !!! · C12
Mr_Wheresmyclick: damn, can you like, at least not do it in 1 paragraph? Got a headache
I Cant Miss !!! · C2
Mr_Wheresmyclick: damn, can you like, at least not do it in 1 paragraph? Got a headache
I Cant Miss !!! · C2
Rain_Senpai: Could have made it longer
Legendary Shadow · C117
MysticDaCrazy1: Thanks Mr.E for the chapter, XP and comment about feeding the story...
I Cant Miss !!! · C88
Jasonenrick: Imagine ,he is running to their court because he stole the Ball from the enemy Team.
And one person ( the one he stole the ball from) is chasing him and then Eazy stops in track and makes a floor pass throuth the legs of the person who is chasing him .
At the same time our mc takes a step back ...takes the ball and makes a 3-point .
If you get what i mean hehehe would be a awesome move.
And the enemy is just like Wtf happened ;)I Cant Miss !!! · C88
Jasonenrick: Imagine ,he is running to their court because he stole the Ball from the enemy Team.
And one person ( the one he stole the ball from) is chasing him and then Eazy stops in track and makes a floor pass throuth the legs of the person who is chasing him .
At the same time our mc takes a step back ...takes the ball and makes a 3-point .
If you get what i mean hehehe would be a awesome move.
And the enemy is just like Wtf happened ;)I Cant Miss !!! · C88
SKYoupley: sorry man not trying to be mean ,but this the worst grammar in a novel i ever saw, try to use some ponctuation and more structure, your novel is good but the structure just make it harder to enjoy it.
good luck man :)I Cant Miss !!! · C0
Irina_Akashira: Have you thought if/what will you evolve this eevee?
If we consider the darkness.like them of most of his companions, the most fitting would be Umbreon
And if we consider team's complementation, either Jolteon or LeafeonLegendary Shadow · C116
