Pulchritudinous | The Hobbit

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shifuufufuuud

This is yaoi!!!!the story is great but I hate yaoi so those who hate yaoi you have been warned and author put yaoi tag in this fanfic!!!!!!!

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Jasonenrick

Writing Quality 5-Stars Story Development 5-Stars Character Design 5-Stars Updating Stability 5-Stars World Background 5-Stars First of all, before I begin, this Novel is outstanding and I appreciate every second and every word put into it. Writing Quality[WQ]: It is really good and one can understand everything! The content is grounded in facts: Data, research, fact-checking, you name it. It doesn't have a single point of view but roots out opposing viewpoints which makes the story interesting and alive. The word choice is also good, not too complicated so that the average reader can understand what the author wants to tell us! Story Development[SD]: The Story is engaging, entertaining, and - most importantly - the Mc is clouded in mystery which makes us, the readers, want to learn more about him and discover what his story is. It goes onward, neither too fast nor too slow, just perfect in my opinion. I hate it when I read a Story and the MC is stuck in a place for a long period only for the author to drop the story. Also, I am very curious about what his goal is and why he is the way he is, I don't want to spoiler too much. Character Design[CD]: The Mc is very likeable, easy-going, full of energy, warm-hearted but he also has his downs where he is depressed but that's like 1% of the Story. He has a bewitching personality and qualities that make him different; unique! He is imperfect, which makes him perfect because nobody is perfect and that's good. Updating Stability[US]: It's one chapter a day so far and that's good, considering that the author probably isn't a full-time author and has his/her one private life, as we all do. There isn't much to say here, so on we go! World Background[WB]: It is the Hobbit, so there isn't much to complain about here even if one wanted to. But the author makes a good job of describing the world and hasn't made a huge mistake yet. In my opinion, It is a Novel that nearly every fan of the Hobbit would probably appreciate. (An: English isn't my mother language so if there are any grammar problems or some writing mistakes I did, then please ignore them ;)! That said, enjoy the story and stay healthy! ) #CornbringerSquat #HolyJokerSquat #DevilFrameSquat

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DaoistSKXmyM

Керемет маған қатты ұнады, автор размет.❤️✨❤️✨❤️✨❤️✨❤️✨❤️❤️🔘❤️❤️❤️🔘❤️❤️❤️✨✨✨✨✨✨❤️✨❤️✨✨✨✨❤️✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨❤️❤️❤️❤️✨✨✨✨✨✨❤️❤️✨❤️✨✨✨соңы аянышты. Хоббит , Властелин колец фильмі өте жақсы фильмдердің бері кішкентай кезімнен көретінмін