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Cetotris

Shameless Author review here. Since this is my first book, there will be many errors. Be it with plotholes or me changing part of the story months later. Can't be helped, sometimes I can't bear to let some BS I previously wrote stay in the story. However the one thing I'm rather confident in, is the quality of my writing. Stability of Updates is rather well... non existent? I started with uploading twice a week and rotated to uploading once a month 3 times in a row, to me currently uploading every few days because I have some chapters remaining. As noted it is possible that the novel will go without uploading for a year. The novel is rather fast paced, duo to me being really bad at stretching it out but anyway you get the point. What I realised after reading through each of the chapters once again is that even though Cilia is the MC, the story is written more like an introduction to the actual start of the Novel. Though I doubt, that I will ever get that far, my apologies. In my honest opinion, I still don't get how almost 200 people are currently reading this, as there are way better novels out there, but I'm still happy you decided to give it a try. One thing I will promise is, that the moment I decide, that I won't continue with the story while being in the middle of something, is the time I will write about how the story would have approximately finished, just on a much smaller scale. I do hope you enjoy reading my work and feel free to bombard me with questions, Ideas or complains you may have. I got enough time for all of it. You can hurl questions at me even a year from now on, it doesn't really matter.

LV 13

Zerootwoo

Shameless 5 star author review where? But it’s a pretty good book you should Go and read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@

Just want to be nice and leave a first review, even though it has only been a few chapters because I found this and have a quest to complete. The Novel is a bit fast paced and a few abilities are only briefly mentioned in the beginning. I don't know if they will be shown later on, but the development of the sci-fi part is rather slow. The concept is good and to work is continuing to be improved on. For example the talents, shown in the end of the first chapter, were not there at the start. Length of the chapters has seen a major improvement, as the wordcount jumped from an average of 800 words, to an average of >1500. Overall: It's a well written novel for a first time author and improvements are visible while reading. You can also just checking the first few chapters, which have already been updated and improved a few times.