Queen of His World

It is an honest-to-God sin that novels like these don't get the attention they deserve on this site. With that said, let's get into this. Writing Quality: 5/5 No grammar errors that I noticed as of yet. There are some minor distractions stylistically, but they're so insignificant that I wouldn't worry about them whatsoever. If I had to give a criticism, I would say the flow could be improved by adding more short somewhat 'biting' sentences for impact and to break up the monotony. Stability of Updates: 5/5 I don't comment on this. Story Development: 5/5 This is the kicker. This story from the immediate beginning has you wondering what the hell is going on. Suddenly, a cut to the other side of the world happens after a shocking ending to the first chapter. When you get to the third chapter, you begin to get some hints and understand that there's something far deeper beneath the surface. I truly think this is a masterful start to the story and I look forward to where it will go in the future. Character Design: 5/5 As of now, there are few established characters. That said, the characters (who may or not be minor) that have appeared so far have all had distinct voice and characteristics. There is a clear layer of realism to this story. World Background: 5/5 It's obvious that the author has done their homework. Information regarding China (where the second and third chapters take place) is correct. While I'm not a medical professional, the environment and details in the second chapter seem natural to the point that whether they're true or not doesn't matter, as few would be able to tell the difference. Overall: 5/5 I almost never give 5/5 reviews. That's partially because I have to change my scale depending upon whom I'm reviewing — since this website has such a range. Obviously, there is no story that's a true 5/5, but as far as this site goes, if I'm not going to give it to a story like this, then I don't know whom I'd give it to. Keep up the good work.