/ Fantasy / Queen Zendaya
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[In the evil forest]
I passed every tree and every animal heading to the tree near the lake. The one that Zaire was perching on earlier. Zaire left his spear beneath this tree, and I was on my way to grab that Spears. If It thrust my body before contact, then I wouldn't have any distress. But, if it kills me, then I will rest in peace. I will know that I died fighting to be with the one I love. I died for love and died trying.
However, how did I end up here? When I was a young girl I got lost in an Evil forest. I was then rescued by a man called Mr. Makena. According to my village beliefs, my fate is to be a queen. I grew up with a Believe that I will be the queen of Amari.
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What an ineffable place the ocean is? And an adventure awaits me. Love is my priority and I'm ready to fight for my love.
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Disappointment, Hope, love, and bravery. These are all the things that I will go through to realize my true fate. You could be more than what is said you're and your fate could be greater than said. Some things come at the least expected and greater than were initially expected.
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Write a reviewHey, the author here! One thing I can guarantee is the uniqueness of this story. The setting is in the ancient African world and the mystery mermaid world. If you give it a chance you won't regret it, as everything gradually gets better and better.
Great story! The pacing of the plot is perfect! Although I didn't agree with the character's thoughts in the beginning of the story, her character development later on made her more and more relatable. Good job on pushing the plot forward and the character development! The world development is also unfolding nicely!
This story is really amazing , i love the way it's written the different and diverse names that the characters have[img=faceslap].It's not one of those stories you are used to reading .
This is one of those "unique" stories that doesn't feel weird. Absolutely love the African culture within this work, and I really felt like I was in Africa! There were some issues with the writing(Word choice and some basic grammar mistakes) and the writing feels foreign at times, but overall, a good read!
Hello author nice writing. I love mysteries. And your story is full of thrills. I'm waiting for your new chapters. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
I am not really into queens, sword and all. But, this piece of work is amazing and really good to read. Good job author!๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
I love everything about this book. I was expecting cliche, but it's anything but. Every chapter I get more amazed and I just wanna read it til the end. Great work author
The story has been developed very well, you read the beginning of the book knowing the plot of the story. I love how the book remains true to its identity and how the characters are embraced in African culture and religion. It resonates with pre-colonial times and for that I love it. We are able to travel back in time and have a glimpse of how life used to be. It is African centred and for that I love it. It is very interesting how the plot was twisted which keeps you wanting to know more if the predetermined fate of the protagonist is going come alive or not. A great read.
Reveal SpoilerGreat and interesting start. It has a premise that gets you into a storyline. One thing though is that I find the choice of words quite typical and the writing style common, but other than that, I get the gist of the plot. Despite what I said about its writing style, I kind of liked the way the author humbly writes each chapter.
Author NthabisengMogajane
Great Storyline and excellent story. kept me glued to the very end. thank you for sharing. I really loved it. Your characters are very very uniques as well