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its not explicit and i only got to chapter 4 but id advise avoiding this novel unless u wanna be put on a list.. if u know what i mean. ............
great novel.................................................................................................................................
good novel, it's finally back[img=recommend]................................................................................................
this is a very enjoyable read. I binge read the chapters I am eagerly waiting for more adventures of Leon and Carla. Carla is tooo cute and not in a annoying way which proves that the character was very well written. continue the good work, pls don't drop.🙏🏽
There's this ORG Novel about an mc who time traveled back in her childhood, and I could say with confidence that it's almost on par on that in terms of Plot, Fluff, sliced of life, decent English and the ideas and info are well thought out and researched.
I like this story it has very charming characters and I personally like how it's paced also love how it is slowly becoming more supernatural but the mc OMG he's such a player
me gusta mucho la historia .los personajes la locuras de Carla y leo espero que esta novela tenga para rato ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
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why is one of the tags beautifulfemale lead isnt the protagnist a malewhy is one of the tags beautifulfemale lead isnt the protagnist a male
This novel deserves more, it os very calming, peaceful, and sweet. Like how I would unconciously smile from time to time from how they interact. Anyway, I look forward to the following chapters and hope the author would continue this.
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once again I am reviewing this. I like the book, its really good. Spam: Hw Cy ha wax CT GG by be CT CT low low web my yea web by da Abdallah Lee Beaune Jahn jack valances Jagdish
Me encanta este libro, muy original e inovador[img = recomendar],ideal para alegrarte el dia (demasiado tierno) ojala alla mas novelas de este tipo
Reveal Spoiler idk if I've already given a review, or even if I can give a second review, but it deserves a second one either way if I did, its just that good of a book, even if there are a couple little mistakes here and there.
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The sweetest novel i ever read. I just want leon and carla grow quickly nad marry each other. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Really like the story! Spam: Lowlands pants below weekend Amish itself weekend isn't hands email Ksenia manse bean cyborg line life's all ma so who lowBurberry hunting turbidity Uxbridge palindrome Pauling eventing benevolent whoa balls Ivanka hashish idk bag
I don't know what is slive of life and I am here to find out what it is 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
I dont want to nitpick to much but the fact the the children speak so eloquently and can semmingly articulate everything well at that age is a little off putting. An example would be the teacher not blinking an eye at a 5 year old saying standardized or being able to introduce themselves professionally. Otherwise great.
what can i say this story is very heartwarming story i didnt even notice time pass and cant count how many times i smiled reading this, i just hope author would do little by little time skip also make mc actually do little exercise to be fit when he goes highschool in the future over all i love the story. keep it up!
I'm being biased here because I both Liked And Loved this Book!! Wishing for this Novel to keep Updating and More Supports from Readers...!! 😁
reading for the fourth time from the start.😂😂. three times from previous author book. never get board👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
haven't read it yet but I'm pretty interested with this one. Not a review but I feel that I rated it correctly, my instincts screaming to read it! hooked by the plot and hoping to stay because of the characters.
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Good slow burn.... .. .. .. .. .. .... .. ... ... .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. ... .. .. .. .. ... ... .. ... .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. ...
This story is best when you just wanna wash away the filth and muck from other crappy stories. Very wholesome and enjoyable. The story Is coming along quite well and I look forward to MOARRRRR!
Is this the same as before(prev. author) or is it different? I'm just curious, because I know that there are a lot of chapters in the other work.
I just want to say while it's still early change the storage 'ring' cause when he grows up it's weird how a ring for a 5 yr old will still fit, sure magic and all that but it's weird, other than that the story's good
good luck and thank you for continuing this amazing novel .............................................................................................
You said you'd be back... From month to month I come back here but nothing yet... Come back soon please, I miss this work so short but so good, please come back. I'd even pay for it.
its not explicit and i only got to chapter 4 but id advise avoiding this novel unless u wanna be put on a list.. if u know what i mean. ............
great novel.................................................................................................................................
good novel, it's finally back[img=recommend]................................................................................................
this is a very enjoyable read. I binge read the chapters I am eagerly waiting for more adventures of Leon and Carla. Carla is tooo cute and not in a annoying way which proves that the character was very well written. continue the good work, pls don't drop.🙏🏽
There's this ORG Novel about an mc who time traveled back in her childhood, and I could say with confidence that it's almost on par on that in terms of Plot, Fluff, sliced of life, decent English and the ideas and info are well thought out and researched.
I like this story it has very charming characters and I personally like how it's paced also love how it is slowly becoming more supernatural but the mc OMG he's such a player
me gusta mucho la historia .los personajes la locuras de Carla y leo espero que esta novela tenga para rato ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
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why is one of the tags beautifulfemale lead isnt the protagnist a malewhy is one of the tags beautifulfemale lead isnt the protagnist a male
This novel deserves more, it os very calming, peaceful, and sweet. Like how I would unconciously smile from time to time from how they interact. Anyway, I look forward to the following chapters and hope the author would continue this.
Great novel keep going Great novel keep going Great novel keep going Great novel keep going Great novel keep going Great novel keep going
once again I am reviewing this. I like the book, its really good. Spam: Hw Cy ha wax CT GG by be CT CT low low web my yea web by da Abdallah Lee Beaune Jahn jack valances Jagdish
Me encanta este libro, muy original e inovador[img = recomendar],ideal para alegrarte el dia (demasiado tierno) ojala alla mas novelas de este tipo
Reveal Spoiler idk if I've already given a review, or even if I can give a second review, but it deserves a second one either way if I did, its just that good of a book, even if there are a couple little mistakes here and there.
Reveal Spoiler The sweetest novel i ever read. I just want leon and carla grow quickly nad marry each other. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Really like the story! Spam: Lowlands pants below weekend Amish itself weekend isn't hands email Ksenia manse bean cyborg line life's all ma so who lowBurberry hunting turbidity Uxbridge palindrome Pauling eventing benevolent whoa balls Ivanka hashish idk bag
I don't know what is slive of life and I am here to find out what it is 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
I dont want to nitpick to much but the fact the the children speak so eloquently and can semmingly articulate everything well at that age is a little off putting. An example would be the teacher not blinking an eye at a 5 year old saying standardized or being able to introduce themselves professionally. Otherwise great.
what can i say this story is very heartwarming story i didnt even notice time pass and cant count how many times i smiled reading this, i just hope author would do little by little time skip also make mc actually do little exercise to be fit when he goes highschool in the future over all i love the story. keep it up!
I'm being biased here because I both Liked And Loved this Book!! Wishing for this Novel to keep Updating and More Supports from Readers...!! 😁
reading for the fourth time from the start.😂😂. three times from previous author book. never get board👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
haven't read it yet but I'm pretty interested with this one. Not a review but I feel that I rated it correctly, my instincts screaming to read it! hooked by the plot and hoping to stay because of the characters.
Reveal Spoiler Good slow burn.... .. .. .. .. .. .... .. ... ... .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. ... .. .. .. .. ... ... .. ... .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. ...
This story is best when you just wanna wash away the filth and muck from other crappy stories. Very wholesome and enjoyable. The story Is coming along quite well and I look forward to MOARRRRR!
Is this the same as before(prev. author) or is it different? I'm just curious, because I know that there are a lot of chapters in the other work.
I just want to say while it's still early change the storage 'ring' cause when he grows up it's weird how a ring for a 5 yr old will still fit, sure magic and all that but it's weird, other than that the story's good
good luck and thank you for continuing this amazing novel .............................................................................................
You said you'd be back... From month to month I come back here but nothing yet... Come back soon please, I miss this work so short but so good, please come back. I'd even pay for it.