Reborn as a lord of change (dropped)

LV 3

FPJK

Story is just ehhh. The mc literally just becomes god in like 2 seconds with the sheer density of plot armour. The writing is passable if you were 8. There is little to no flair in the writing, for example, ‘ Kairos walks to somewhere and stops to look around. Kairos then ate a steak.’ (This is just the formatting of how the mc is described.) Then, you may think,’ The writing will get better, right?’ No it doesn’t, the most it has improved by is the spacing of paragraphs which should have been mandatory. The characters are one dimensional, they seem to have less depth than Chinese cultivation characters. The update stability is fine, not like many are interested after dumpster fire that is the first chapter. Also world development? Why would there be world development when the mc is barely two dimensional. The only thing I would say is good is the character design, but it’s not like the author made the designs. In summary, reading a Chinese novel may be worth more of your time than this. ( Also author, a recommendation is that you edit some of your past chapters. At least bring it up to your current standard, albeit very a very low standard.)

LV 2

N0_Hope

Sorry but this has too many bad things to continue. Not only there are no separations in the lines ( making the reading unconfortable ) but the story got boring even before I reached half of the first chapter... I understand you tried and maybe others might like this but I can't handle this type of " mix " .

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