Reborn as Adam Taurus

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Moist_Liu_Kang

I really like how your taking your time and not rushing the story like other people. I hope that you will continue with what you're doing and progressively build up to the canon storyline. Some things I really liked was how the MC is not finding things to make him op like the moment he steps into the world, not making the MC overpowered as hell and not giving him BS abilities that have no reason to be in the story as I find that stupid but its still entertaining so I guess its okay for most people. Some things I don't really like is that MC somehow still has the same Semblance as canon Adam because as far as I know the semblance depends on ones soul and since Adam isn't the same person I believe he shouldn't have canon Adams "Moonslice" but I don't really find it that distracting and can quickly get used to it. I hope this story continues until its done.

I think it will be better for a Single pairing, and with Weiss Schnee if you can. They're quite similar if you think about it. And that pairing could help with the goal that Weiss wanted to do to the SDC company, fixing it's work ethic. And the ensuing drama would be epic too. Why not Blake? Because it's repeatedly stated by Blake in the early Volume that her relationship with Adam is a student and mentor. But somehow that's all is thrown away and Adam is changed from a Terrorist leader that cares about his subordinates, to a pathetic psychotic yandere ex-boyfriend. And no, don't replace Jaune with Adam, that's just lazy writing. Instead what you should do is try to integrate Adam with the main character of RWBY without eclipsing the main character potential to grow as a character. My suggestion is, instead of having Adam joined the Beacon, just keep him in the White Fang. But instead of submitting fully to Cinder, he only joins her for the sake of his subordinates safety, (Just like in the series the first time Cinder meet him) to silently protect the RWBY main character from the cover of White Fang, and to wait patiently to backstab Cinder. (Preferably during the fall of Beacon, so that Pyrha can be saved). But the main character of RWBY including Blake didn't know this at first but will gradually understand Adam. This will make Adam W Taurus into a cool misunderstood anti hero like Itachi Uchiha, with the Intention of saving as many RWBY main character as possible. And I think that is the most suitable route for Adam. He will be the Anti hero to Ruby Heroism.

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Killler_Queen

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RiotBringer

Now i will be completely honest with you i suck at giving reviews, but i would like to say i really like this novel its not fast or slow just normal paced and the person development for adam i feel could be more defined but that can be done at a later date, and with my extremely small knowledge of RWBY fanfics i would say this novel is better than most of the novels i find besides two novels that are of such good quality like this one, so thank you for your effort in writing this novel.

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Lyndan_Brovado

Love this story. Has a lot of potential to be one of the best Adam fics out there. PLEASE update soon. It’s too good of a story to be left unfinished.

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WhiteNeon

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Absolute_sword

This is an excellent fanfic, Adam fighting style and semblance was my favorite in rwby so i like that you took him as your mc and made some change to his character so that he won't be an asshole while keeping his seriousness and goal for equality. The story is very good so far and i like you pairing him with Blake. Thanks for the good fanfic.

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Alz_

Love it😍😍😍😍😍 Pls continue😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 seriously tho this is really great

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Waldiney_Silva

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viloh

It's too hard to find anymore good rwby fanfics , especially with adam as the MC , there are none , only jaune fics ( everybody is writing about him for some reason ) I'm extremly dissapointed thay this was dropped , it had so much potential If anyone is reading this , please help a brother out and recommend any rwby fanfic you know that has adam as the mc

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DiligentKraken

Come on update please add new chapter don't drop this fanfic man its very good an new perspective new possibilities DON'T DROP! DON'T DROP! DON'T DROP! DON'T DROP! DON'T DROP! DON'T DROP!

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DiligentKraken

This is a good fanfic it shows a new perspective on how will Adam Taurus could have been if he didn't go bat**** crazy at cannon and git ruined by not revealing much about him

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SaintKing07

Martin Luther King Jr was one of America’s most influential civil rights activists. His passionate, but non-violent protests, helped to raise awareness of racial inequalities in America, leading to significant political change. Martin Luther King was also an eloquent orator who captured the imagination and hearts of people, both black and white. Early Life of Martin Luther King Martin Luther King, Jr. was born in Atlanta on 15 January 1929. Both his father and grandfather were pastors in an African-American Baptist church. M. Luther King attended Morehouse College in Atlanta, (segregated schooling) and then went to study at Crozer Theological Seminary in Pennsylvania and Boston University. During his time at University Martin Luther King became aware of the vast inequality and injustice faced by black Americans; in particular, he was influenced by Gandhi’s philosophy of non-violent protest. The philosophy of Gandhi tied in with the teachings of his Baptist faith. At the age of 24, King married Coretta Scott, a beautiful and talented young woman. After getting married, King became a pastor at Dexter Avenue Baptist Church in Montgomery, Alabama. Montgomery Bus Boycott martin luther kingA turning point in the life of Martin Luther King was the Montgomery Bus Boycott which he helped to promote. His boycott also became a turning point in the civil rights struggle – attracting national press for the cause. It began in innocuous circumstances on 5 December 1955. Rosa Parks, a civil rights activist, refused to give up her seat – she was sitting in a white-only area. This broke the strict segregation of coloured and white people on the Montgomery buses. The bus company refused to back down and so Martin Luther King helped to organise a strike where coloured people refused to use any of the city buses. The boycott lasted for several months, the issue was then brought to the Supreme Court who declared the segregation was unconstitutional. Civil Rights Movement. After the success of the Montgomery bus boycott, King and other ministers founded the Southern Christian Leadership Conference (SCLC). This proved to be a nucleus for the growing civil rights movement. Later there would be arguments about the best approach to take. In particular, the 1960s saw the rise of the Black power movement, epitomised by Malcolm X and other black nationalist groups. However, King always remained committed to the ideals of non-violent struggle. malcolm x Martin Luther King and Malcolm X briefly meet in 1964 before going to listen to a Senate debate about civil rights in Washington. (image Wikicommons) Speeches of Martin Luther King Jr Martin Luther King was an inspirational and influential speaker; he had the capacity to move and uplift his audiences. In particular, he could offer a vision of hope. He captured the injustice of the time but also felt that this injustice was like a passing cloud. King frequently made references to God, the Bible and his Christian Faith. “And this is what Jesus means when he said: “How is it that you can see the mote in your brother’s eye and not see the beam in your own eye?” Or to put it in Moffatt’s translation: “How is it that you see the splinter in your brother’s eye and fail to see the plank in your own eye?” And this is one of the tragedies of human nature. So we begin to love our enemies and love those persons that hate us whether in collective life or individual life by looking at ourselves.” – Martin Luther King His speeches were largely free of revenge, instead focusing on the need to move forward. He was named as Man of the Year by Time magazine in 1963, it followed his famous and iconic “I Have a Dream Speech” – delivered in Washington during a civil rights march. “I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: “We hold these truths to be self-evident: that all men are created equal.” I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at a table of brotherhood” – Martin Luther King The following year, Martin Luther King was awarded the Nobel Peace Prize for his work towards social justice. King announced he would turn over the prize money $54,123 to the civil rights movement. With the prestige of the Nobel Prize, King was increasingly consulted by politicians such as Lyndon Johnson. However, King’s opposition to the Vietnam War did not endear him to the Johnson administration; King also began receiving increased scrutiny from the authorities, such as the FBI. On April 4th, 1968, King was assassinated. It was one day after he had delivered his final speech “I’ve Been to the Mountaintop” In his honour, America has instigated a national Martin Luther King Day. He remains symbolic of America’s fight for justice and racial equality. Citation: Pettinger, Tejvan. “Martin Luther King Biography”, Oxford, UK. ***.biographyonline.net, 11th Feb 2008. Last updated 2 March 2018.

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Samuel76

Please don't drop this it's a very good novel and please update more

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Grishzag

good work! ..................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Uguc6ghr

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