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translation not that good some words are missing or some just aren't even words at all
it's not very interesting, most of this story is a regular flare .......................................................................................
Quite a good read but not the quality you would expect for a novel with 4.5 rating. The text needs a bit of editing and the writing format needs to be fixed. Reading it almost made me sleepy. The character of the mc also needs to be expanded cuz he felt really boring to read. Good story premise and idea though. The author should've made things more interesting and less boring. Honestly, this fanfic felt like a raft joined together by a single rope. The ideas are too scattered and not connected with each other. The story progression feels forced sometimes as a result. It's as if the author never had the outline of the story in mind and it was written by spontaneous bursts of inspiration and joined together poorly. I'd say that the quality of the story would be between 3.0 - 3.5 stars.
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it's a slow pace story but it's good.... I just hope that when the time uchiha massacre happen you will not kill izumi just to awaken MC saringan....
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The idea behind the story is good. But a lot of editing is necessary. The English quality us very bad and sometimes it is hard to read. The narration is also too rushed and lacks personality. And please use punctuation!! It's making me breathless. The main character is so confusing. His personality is quite plain. Textbook like. And sometimes too forced. As for the story development and world background there is nothing to say. It okay. But the story is worth it. It has potential. Continue to improve yourself Lord Author and thank you for the story.
Whose the love interest ?? ?? ?? ?? ??? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?
the story is great and has lot of potential. but i hope that you will correct the grammar and spelling errors because it was destroying the mood of the story and sometimes i dont understand some parts of it. but overall its great. just edit and correct what was wrong and everything will follow.
this shit good man very good i just dont like that you made this a harem i mean i like hinata and ino but not together..this shit good man very good i just dont like that you made this a harem i mean i like hinata and ino but not together..
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The story is too good but i was hopeing the mc is going to play around with so many girls if ur not buildjng a harem. Also hinata is meh man maybe do konan (If you can Do it in the plot) hanabi is good too (if she is not too Young(personally my preferance)
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A very good naruto story. Keep up the good work. The only thing, that could be better is the grammar. But nevertheless well written.....................
Usually i dont read naruto twin fanfics cause they all have cring name like kirito or something like that but this seems to have Potential 🔥⚜️
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Ohhhh glad that you remake it. ...If im not wrong the last time he become an anbu and fight with otsutsuki clan? And he is not even 15 and use 9th gate? Maybe i read a wrong fanfic😂😂
I would give 5 ⭐️ but the tag says reincarnation but from what I have read it shows nothung that signifys reincarnation minus that instead if one Kushina and Minato had two kids
update more please!!!!!! update more please!!!!!! update more please!!!!!! update more please!!!!!! update more please!!!!!! update more please!!!!!!
I have to say you have good storyline and i like it. But the grammar mistakes will ruin your book. Bet it remind me of my self because English is not main language .i hope you will improve and make books read by many. I will love to be editor but my job demand a lot of time. I hope you will find a good editor that will help you in the future
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Gracias por escribir esta novela me gustó mucho el personaje y esperó que no terminé en harem que ya está muy gastado esperó más capitulos^_^^_^
My only complaint is the English quality. It seems like one of two things. 1. English is not your first language 2. You don't read through what you write to make sure it actually makes sense There are so many simple mistakes and it makes reading this really difficult. The story is really creative but please go over your content before you post.
This story is click bait it’s not a real reincarnation the mc has his memories wiped and is a pedophile.
translation not that good some words are missing or some just aren't even words at all
it's not very interesting, most of this story is a regular flare .......................................................................................
Quite a good read but not the quality you would expect for a novel with 4.5 rating. The text needs a bit of editing and the writing format needs to be fixed. Reading it almost made me sleepy. The character of the mc also needs to be expanded cuz he felt really boring to read. Good story premise and idea though. The author should've made things more interesting and less boring. Honestly, this fanfic felt like a raft joined together by a single rope. The ideas are too scattered and not connected with each other. The story progression feels forced sometimes as a result. It's as if the author never had the outline of the story in mind and it was written by spontaneous bursts of inspiration and joined together poorly. I'd say that the quality of the story would be between 3.0 - 3.5 stars.
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it's a slow pace story but it's good.... I just hope that when the time uchiha massacre happen you will not kill izumi just to awaken MC saringan....
Reveal Spoiler The idea behind the story is good. But a lot of editing is necessary. The English quality us very bad and sometimes it is hard to read. The narration is also too rushed and lacks personality. And please use punctuation!! It's making me breathless. The main character is so confusing. His personality is quite plain. Textbook like. And sometimes too forced. As for the story development and world background there is nothing to say. It okay. But the story is worth it. It has potential. Continue to improve yourself Lord Author and thank you for the story.
Whose the love interest ?? ?? ?? ?? ??? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?
the story is great and has lot of potential. but i hope that you will correct the grammar and spelling errors because it was destroying the mood of the story and sometimes i dont understand some parts of it. but overall its great. just edit and correct what was wrong and everything will follow.
this shit good man very good i just dont like that you made this a harem i mean i like hinata and ino but not together..this shit good man very good i just dont like that you made this a harem i mean i like hinata and ino but not together..
Reveal Spoiler The story is too good but i was hopeing the mc is going to play around with so many girls if ur not buildjng a harem. Also hinata is meh man maybe do konan (If you can Do it in the plot) hanabi is good too (if she is not too Young(personally my preferance)
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A very good naruto story. Keep up the good work. The only thing, that could be better is the grammar. But nevertheless well written.....................
Usually i dont read naruto twin fanfics cause they all have cring name like kirito or something like that but this seems to have Potential 🔥⚜️
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Ohhhh glad that you remake it. ...If im not wrong the last time he become an anbu and fight with otsutsuki clan? And he is not even 15 and use 9th gate? Maybe i read a wrong fanfic😂😂
I would give 5 ⭐️ but the tag says reincarnation but from what I have read it shows nothung that signifys reincarnation minus that instead if one Kushina and Minato had two kids
update more please!!!!!! update more please!!!!!! update more please!!!!!! update more please!!!!!! update more please!!!!!! update more please!!!!!!
I have to say you have good storyline and i like it. But the grammar mistakes will ruin your book. Bet it remind me of my self because English is not main language .i hope you will improve and make books read by many. I will love to be editor but my job demand a lot of time. I hope you will find a good editor that will help you in the future
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Gracias por escribir esta novela me gustó mucho el personaje y esperó que no terminé en harem que ya está muy gastado esperó más capitulos^_^^_^
My only complaint is the English quality. It seems like one of two things. 1. English is not your first language 2. You don't read through what you write to make sure it actually makes sense There are so many simple mistakes and it makes reading this really difficult. The story is really creative but please go over your content before you post.
This story is click bait it’s not a real reincarnation the mc has his memories wiped and is a pedophile.