Dave_Guest

Dave_Guest

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Dave_Guest
Dave_Guest
2 months ago
Commented

Most rewritten things wont be better. And Most of the time they will lose their fanbase. You still can make changes as the Story keeps going. On top, one piece provides enough character Transformation.

Dave_Guest
Dave_Guest
2 months ago
Commented

Now Deep shit. Reemergence of Hulk. He against the avengers. Furys death. Next carol danvers. To tell the truth I don’t think it’s a good idea in Marvel to fck with the plot. And if fck with it, only as support, and never try to diverge from the timeline. Because marvel will fck back.

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Dave_Guest
Dave_Guest
2 months ago
Commented

Yeah, Hulk will crawl out of Hell. And benner isnt really at fault too. And Betty is pretty innocent too. Abomination can be discussed. At least Hulk is a good training buddy.

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Dave_Guest
Dave_Guest
3 months ago
Posted

This time the author read my mind. I just startet playing cyberpunk again. So far I love this story. And I recommend it to every cyberpunk Fan. I Hope the author will keep writing this story.

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Dave_Guest
4 months ago
Commented

But he was only around 200kg So propably a Little bigger than Roku in his Prime

Dave_Guest
Dave_Guest
4 months ago
Commented

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If anyone actually gets it right...without cheating, No Time Traveling allowed...I'll bless you all with a free chapter, no Power Stones required.

Naruto: Reborn with the Template System

Naruto: Reborn with the Template System

Anime & Comics · Arthorain

Dave_Guest
Dave_Guest
5 months ago
Posted

I Like It. …………….. …………….. ……………… ………………

Dave_Guest
Dave_Guest
7 months ago
Posted

It’s a nice Story so far, but at some times it is a little shallow. The author could make the story a little more vibrant. Give the mc some depth. And when MC is progressing in strength, even though he is stronger than his enemies it reads like the author is trying to nerf him. You could try to give the MC a little more thoughts. But all in all a nice story, with a new and unique take on Naruto.

Dave_Guest
Dave_Guest
7 months ago
Commented

Just use sparda

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Fairy Tail: Lost One

Fairy Tail: Lost One

Anime & Comics · sssachin098

Dave_Guest
Dave_Guest
8 months ago
Commented

At this Point i would Anna just let her be absorbed completely. Would be a nice power up for her and the viltrumet gene could give her a kind of gene lock