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Reborn as Ron, with PDC system
3.92 (12 ratings)
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What happens when a person who loathes a character is stuffed into that character and has a weird system to make things interesting. Follow the journey of this "Ron Weasley" to find out.
Note: I am giving prompts to ChatGPT and refining the chapters as I have no talent in writing ang English being my 3rd language makes things hard for me. So sorry for the inconvenience.
Note: I do not own the image, I got it from Pintrest.
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MC is biased on the get go despite certain events not happening yet, so its really hard for me to like this when we kept getting MC's expositions that mostly based from fanon theories. He also do way too much, all work no play.
Bruh, if the english is your 3rd language and you do do bot have the ability to properly write in it, then write it in your first language and translate it with deepl or some other kind of shit and do not use a fking openai shitty gpt. While I'm an atheist, god is my witness that I and many other people despise novels written by that abomination of artifical intelligence. I would be rather gutted than be sentenced to read that. I give you 3 stars as advice ad normally I would give 1 star no matter the quality if the novel was written by chat gpt. Sorry for mistakes as english is my 2nd language
Great book, the idea of this intrigues me and i hope you don't drop it as the concept of the whole book is great, i would 100% recommend people read this book
Very new idea and good story flow. But the update speed is very slow if u r using AI for story help
Really good and refreshing story Please donโt give up writing the story I canโt wait for our next update๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฐ๐ฐ๐ฐ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ
its nice, tho u need to work on them prompts ..............................................................................................................................
ChatGPT slop. โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ
La historia es buena y tiene mucho potencial, no me molesta el sistema ni todo lo que hace ron, aรบn que es demaciado en muy poco tiempo, solo espero que se pueda realmente apreciar un cambio en el mundo mรกgico y que ron no se aferre al canon, creo que estรก historia es buena por quรฉ no se aferra a los hechos del libro ni a sus personajes. Ron solo trata con algunos personajes con cartas y de resto trata con ginny para giarla por quรฉ es su hermana y con el squin lo que me pรกrese perfecto para esta clase de historia que trata mรกs sobre desarrollo del mundo que sobre personajes. Solo espero que ron no sea griffindor o amigo de Harry Potter o Hermione
๐๐๐ฒ , ๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ'๐ซ๐ ๐๐จ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฐ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ. ๐ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐๐ฅ๐๐ ๐ฎ๐ฉ๐จ๐ง ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐ ๐จ๐ญ๐ญ๐ ๐ฌ๐๐ฒ, ๐ข๐ญโ๐ฌ ๐๐ฆ๐๐ณ๐ข๐ง๐ . ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ง๐๐ฑ๐ญ ๐ฅ๐๐ฏ๐๐ฅ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐ค๐๐ฉ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ง๐ค๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ ๐๐ฐ๐๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ฌ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐ ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง๐ฌ. ๐โ๐ฆ ๐๐ง ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ฐ๐ก๐จ ๐๐จ๐๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฎ๐๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ ๐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ด๐ฎ, ๐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ต๐๐ฎ, ๐๐ผ๐บ๐ถ๐ฐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐ช๐ฒ๐ฏ๐๐ผ๐ผ๐ป๐. ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ง๐ค ๐ข๐ญ'๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐๐ ๐๐ซ๐๐ณ๐ฒ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ง๐จ๐ญ ๐๐จ๐ง๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐๐ฆ๐๐ณ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ข๐ง๐ญ๐จ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐ ๐จ๐ซ ๐ ๐ฐ๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง ๐๐ง๐ ๐โ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐จ ๐ข๐ญ. ๐๐จ ๐ฉ๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ ๐๐ญ ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ, ๐๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ง๐ค ๐ข๐ญ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐จ๐ค ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ฉ๐๐ซ ๐๐จ๐จ๐ฅ ๐ข๐ง ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ญ ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ฆ๐๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ ๐ซ๐๐ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐ ๐๐ญ๐ญ๐๐ง๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง. ๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐ฐ๐๐ง๐ญ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐ก๐๐๐ค ๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ซ๐ค ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ'๐ซ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฐ๐ง ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐ก๐๐ญ ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ข๐ญ, ๐ฐ๐ ๐๐๐ง ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐๐ฎ๐ซ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ ๐จ๐ง ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ ( ๐๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐ง๐๐ฆ๐: ๐บ๐ถ๐ป๐ฎ๐ธ๐ป๐ฌ๐๐). ๐๐๐ง'๐ญ ๐ฐ๐๐ข๐ญ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ก๐๐๐ซ ๐๐๐๐ค ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ. ๐๐๐ ๐๐ซ๐๐ฌ, ๐ ๐ถ๐ป๐ฎ.
The concept is great. I just felt it kinda rushed. I don't know if it is because of the Ai. The characters are there, it's just that their personalities kinda differ on the original(bcs of Ai also I think, the way they talked). Kinda loved it at first then got bored when he added Naruto stuff. Kinda misaligned.
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The writing has potential, but the story isn't up to my taste due to the MC personality. Excerpt from chapter 1: "This world was full of fools, manipulators, and sheep." The MC is focused on himself, the story is focused on the MC, but the MC is not interesting enough for the whole story to revolve around him. So far, all I've seen from the MC expositions are his flaws, his insecurity, his craving for attention, his frustration... The more perfect he tries to be, the more it appears that all his actions are fuelled by his dissatisfaction.