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The story is really good , but I pretty much dropped it after the main character died.... Like I tried to care, but I eventually just couldn't care anymore and dropped it. And supposedly he comes back, but I just couldn't get through it.
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Absolute trash, despite being so far in the story canon still hasn’t changed a single bit, that’s actually crazy you know? I have doubts the story might still be in canon in the 600’s chapters! To make matters even worse, despite the protagonist literally being one of, if not THE strongest person around, HE IS STILL USELESS! Literally nothing he does ever matters, canon still happens, nothing changes, what’s the point of even reading any further? The main character himself is basically filler. Even his medical background has no place in the story! It literally doesn’t add any substance whatsoever, hes basically just another average Joe off the street, adding “medical student” in the synopsis was just another clickbait smh. This story is useless, it’s basically a more boring version of Naruto. What a waste of time.
I enjoy the consistency of the updates, so I really appreciate that. Sometimes in the story, I get lost and have to reread it to understand, but I think that's just me. The jokes, while sometimes out of place, I still enjoy. I think doing what you're doing in the way you want is a good idea. I can't really suggest anything because I'm not a writer, but I'll keep reading if you keep updating.
HE LITERALLY WROTE OUT HIS OWN CHARACTER. I guess he wanted us interested in the canon characters but i don't. Now, for over 100 chapters (and counting) he's literally killed the MC off. I could live with the random nerf, thought the ride was fun enough, but could not be more annoyed at just removing the title character for over 20% of the novel. Not to mention the amount of chapters without him. I want to be a little more understanding that I guess he's more into worldbuilding and the background characters but am too annoyed to seriously consider it.
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I keep getting spammed by bots advertising this story. I see that there are no other comments calling this out, so I can only assume the author is deleting them. If my review gets deleted ill just leave another, so on so on. Your behavior is predatory. It’s also illegal.
Great story I’m not even a quarter way through and it’s getting not slowing down
When i start resding this it kind lf fun from chapter 1 to chapter 300+, but from the part where Izuna disappear for almost 100 chapter and only appear for brief chapter. that when i start feeling bored but still kind of fun ride
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Please can someone tell me if Izuna the MC returns to be the protagonist after his "death" if so, in which chapter does he return?
The story was very good until the birth of Naruto then it started going downhill a little because of the heavy AU most of the story beyond the point is a lot of AU but the quality and the frequency of chapters is very good but the story also has a lot of passing issues I only read till chap 339 so I don’t really know the rest I highly recommend you read it if you like AU
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I'm a new reader to the fan-fic but I love the story and the development of the MC and the other side character I love a good story and hope continues to be a great story so I gave it a full 5 star rating because I love the story so much!!
"Honestly, I really enjoyed this novel, but everything changed when the incident with Rin and Obito mirrored its canon story. It all turned uninteresting and bland, well, even though everyone has their own taste."
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I was looking forward to the romance that the tags promised, but ended up with it being basically glossed over. It literally said nothing about him having a relationship, then it randomly said he had been in a relationship for 6 months. After saying that, there's 2 chapters where he is about to go on a date, but the chapters are actually just a prequel to the date, and then it skips the rest and goes on to talk about what he is doing a few days later. This was around the time I stopped reading, so I'm not sure if it gets any better. The story is good overall, but don't look forward to the romance.
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Overall I think this is a really great novel sure the beginning was a bit rough but I did start getting better later. The author did play with the world background which was a nice touch though that nerf was annoying lol. However the author did improve his writing which is more than u can say for a lot of authors.
It is quite good to read , later on it makes mc op and then lower his involvement in the cannon
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I think this fanfic is quite good, the author created a different storyline, okay I'll give it a rating like this first ............................
I do like the character and the story developed in the novel which get us involved in the Naruto world in different timeline. but I didn't get why people expect our world rule in Naruto and are getting offended because of some minor change in story. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------AMAZING WORK AUTHORE ---------------------------------------------KEEP IT UP ---------------------------------------------------------DON'T LISTEN STUPID COMMENTS -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------LASTLY IT A FAN FIC !!!! JUST HAVE TO ENJOY WHY SO SERIOUS ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------THANKS AUTHUR !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It’s absolutely amazing, it’s just that there are some grammatical errors that annoy me because of my ocd.
My eyes hurt from reading this fic in huge chunks. Not a problem though; had fun the whole time. Favorite things: the humor used throughout and Izuna and his amusing ways of being a good older brother, dad, and husband. And seeing his personality rub off on other characters. Makes me laugh every time. Thank you, Life.
At first grammer of this novel truly disappointed me which leads me to drop the novel.After some time i again give a try to this nove, surprisingly the grammer turns out to be good and tha story is interesting.But to me adding the 'sin of seal' to MC is most disappointing.I think 'sin of seal' is the most frustrating part of this novel for me.I hope Author can pull it out in good way, apart from that i am okay with this novel.
I didn't get how mc could use sharingan without chakra? I mean he unlocked his chakra when he was 4 years old. didn't get it . lolololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololll
Hello! Author here. I am a new writer who is writing a original novel. I have read various and thought of writing a fan-fiction to improve my writing skills. NOW FOR THE FAN-FIC There will be no harem, sorry to disappoint harem lovers. Though there can be two wives depending on reader's demand. A poll will be conducted to decide that. I am writing a action novel with mix elements of fantasy and adventure. I have zero experience in writing romance and don't expect me to pull out cheesy romance out of nowhere, though I am currently reading some romance novels to learn, but that will not be the focus for this novel. As unnecessary romance and harem may f**k up the story and drastically reduce the quality of reading experiences. Thank you and stay tuned with me and also don't forget to check out my original Novel based on Indian Mythology with many legendary beings and powers.
The story is really good , but I pretty much dropped it after the main character died.... Like I tried to care, but I eventually just couldn't care anymore and dropped it. And supposedly he comes back, but I just couldn't get through it.
Reveal Spoiler Absolute trash, despite being so far in the story canon still hasn’t changed a single bit, that’s actually crazy you know? I have doubts the story might still be in canon in the 600’s chapters! To make matters even worse, despite the protagonist literally being one of, if not THE strongest person around, HE IS STILL USELESS! Literally nothing he does ever matters, canon still happens, nothing changes, what’s the point of even reading any further? The main character himself is basically filler. Even his medical background has no place in the story! It literally doesn’t add any substance whatsoever, hes basically just another average Joe off the street, adding “medical student” in the synopsis was just another clickbait smh. This story is useless, it’s basically a more boring version of Naruto. What a waste of time.
I enjoy the consistency of the updates, so I really appreciate that. Sometimes in the story, I get lost and have to reread it to understand, but I think that's just me. The jokes, while sometimes out of place, I still enjoy. I think doing what you're doing in the way you want is a good idea. I can't really suggest anything because I'm not a writer, but I'll keep reading if you keep updating.
HE LITERALLY WROTE OUT HIS OWN CHARACTER. I guess he wanted us interested in the canon characters but i don't. Now, for over 100 chapters (and counting) he's literally killed the MC off. I could live with the random nerf, thought the ride was fun enough, but could not be more annoyed at just removing the title character for over 20% of the novel. Not to mention the amount of chapters without him. I want to be a little more understanding that I guess he's more into worldbuilding and the background characters but am too annoyed to seriously consider it.
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I keep getting spammed by bots advertising this story. I see that there are no other comments calling this out, so I can only assume the author is deleting them. If my review gets deleted ill just leave another, so on so on. Your behavior is predatory. It’s also illegal.
Great story I’m not even a quarter way through and it’s getting not slowing down
When i start resding this it kind lf fun from chapter 1 to chapter 300+, but from the part where Izuna disappear for almost 100 chapter and only appear for brief chapter. that when i start feeling bored but still kind of fun ride
Reveal Spoiler Please can someone tell me if Izuna the MC returns to be the protagonist after his "death" if so, in which chapter does he return?
The story was very good until the birth of Naruto then it started going downhill a little because of the heavy AU most of the story beyond the point is a lot of AU but the quality and the frequency of chapters is very good but the story also has a lot of passing issues I only read till chap 339 so I don’t really know the rest I highly recommend you read it if you like AU
Reveal Spoiler I'm a new reader to the fan-fic but I love the story and the development of the MC and the other side character I love a good story and hope continues to be a great story so I gave it a full 5 star rating because I love the story so much!!
"Honestly, I really enjoyed this novel, but everything changed when the incident with Rin and Obito mirrored its canon story. It all turned uninteresting and bland, well, even though everyone has their own taste."
Reveal Spoiler I was looking forward to the romance that the tags promised, but ended up with it being basically glossed over. It literally said nothing about him having a relationship, then it randomly said he had been in a relationship for 6 months. After saying that, there's 2 chapters where he is about to go on a date, but the chapters are actually just a prequel to the date, and then it skips the rest and goes on to talk about what he is doing a few days later. This was around the time I stopped reading, so I'm not sure if it gets any better. The story is good overall, but don't look forward to the romance.
Reveal Spoiler Overall I think this is a really great novel sure the beginning was a bit rough but I did start getting better later. The author did play with the world background which was a nice touch though that nerf was annoying lol. However the author did improve his writing which is more than u can say for a lot of authors.
It is quite good to read , later on it makes mc op and then lower his involvement in the cannon
Достойный автор 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯🔥🔥🔥🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯💯🔥🔥💯💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥💯🔥
I think this fanfic is quite good, the author created a different storyline, okay I'll give it a rating like this first ............................
I do like the character and the story developed in the novel which get us involved in the Naruto world in different timeline. but I didn't get why people expect our world rule in Naruto and are getting offended because of some minor change in story. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------AMAZING WORK AUTHORE ---------------------------------------------KEEP IT UP ---------------------------------------------------------DON'T LISTEN STUPID COMMENTS -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------LASTLY IT A FAN FIC !!!! JUST HAVE TO ENJOY WHY SO SERIOUS ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------THANKS AUTHUR !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It’s absolutely amazing, it’s just that there are some grammatical errors that annoy me because of my ocd.
My eyes hurt from reading this fic in huge chunks. Not a problem though; had fun the whole time. Favorite things: the humor used throughout and Izuna and his amusing ways of being a good older brother, dad, and husband. And seeing his personality rub off on other characters. Makes me laugh every time. Thank you, Life.
At first grammer of this novel truly disappointed me which leads me to drop the novel.After some time i again give a try to this nove, surprisingly the grammer turns out to be good and tha story is interesting.But to me adding the 'sin of seal' to MC is most disappointing.I think 'sin of seal' is the most frustrating part of this novel for me.I hope Author can pull it out in good way, apart from that i am okay with this novel.
I didn't get how mc could use sharingan without chakra? I mean he unlocked his chakra when he was 4 years old. didn't get it . lolololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololll
Hello! Author here. I am a new writer who is writing a original novel. I have read various and thought of writing a fan-fiction to improve my writing skills. NOW FOR THE FAN-FIC There will be no harem, sorry to disappoint harem lovers. Though there can be two wives depending on reader's demand. A poll will be conducted to decide that. I am writing a action novel with mix elements of fantasy and adventure. I have zero experience in writing romance and don't expect me to pull out cheesy romance out of nowhere, though I am currently reading some romance novels to learn, but that will not be the focus for this novel. As unnecessary romance and harem may f**k up the story and drastically reduce the quality of reading experiences. Thank you and stay tuned with me and also don't forget to check out my original Novel based on Indian Mythology with many legendary beings and powers.