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REBORN WITH A SYSTEM
MC WAS KILLED AND GIVEN 5 WISHES TO CHOOSE FROM
JOIN HIM AS HE JOURNEYS THROUGHOUT THE MULTIVERSE AND CREATES HIS HAREM
THIS IS MY FIRST TIME WRITING A FAN FIC. AS AN AVID READER YOU WILL FIND REFERENCES FORM MANY FANFICS ALREADY PRESENT.HOPE YOU ENJOY READING
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i feel compelled to write a review after following from the start basically. i have a few complaints, 1. the author has a bad naming sense, the main character is called "Lucifer D. Morningstar" i have no idea what the D stands for, also bad at giving titles, can't remember the titles, but i know its bad. 2. the characters are very soul less. initially, the author writes them the way they would act, but after our MC showed up, they basically became bunch of "yes man" puppets who can only follow orders. they have no personality, they act like they have no soul. 3. the pacing, I don't mind a fast pacing, but this too fast. not to mention the 'out of nowhere' romance between Natasha (from marvel) and the main character. it was completely unnecessary, especially when the MC has traversed the world with Kaguya for at least a thousand years, whom he had accepted as a student/servant, and in the recent chapters, romance seems to be brewing between them. which means that this story is going to go an unnecessary, cliché, harem route. Overall, a very cliché, multiverse travelling, wish-fullfillmenr story. and author, i don't mind cringe, but this is just bad. sorry, this is where I drop
Author Aritra_99
Don’t take this the wrong way but, this fic feels like the standard OP Multiversal travel fic. I say Standard because this story has ABSOLUTELY NOTHING to make it stand out from other fics similar to it. The whole process to these type of fics. - MC dies and reincarnates. - MC gets gets 3-5 wishes. - MC gets super Overpowered system. - MC gets super Overpowered in 1 chapter. - MC becomes the strongest in the verse they reincarnate in before leaving. - MC goes to another world where he is either already the strongest or becomes the strongest in 1 chapter of being in another verse.