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Write a reviewInteresting combination of different martial stories into your own. Though I feel like I should point out something. Whether good or bad is up to the Author. The martial art styles and systems seem to contradict eachother a little. For exmaple Niko Style mixed with Dou & Sei seems like they would be both a good and bad combination. Again just my thoughts, this seems like a a hard balance that youβve struck well.
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Writing Quality: 5β Story Development: 4β Too many girls in the Harem. Character Design: 5β Update Stability: 5β World Background: 3β A mash up of defferent animes.
well i hope this fanfict to be top and not will dropped because i love this fanfict . next your art i'am can't waiting for updatedππππππππππππππ and i'am is the chulture man i love harem hahahaha
This is a great story, I recommend everyone read this since the story starts by grabbing you by the balls wanting you to continue reading it.
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Its just a good old fashion martial arts fighting story which incoprates alot of the many martial arts anime and manga. Although the title has the word system in it, it isnt really that prevalent to the story
needs more recognition it's good, but it is new so you know ................................................................................
A mega-crossover world filled with martial artist. So far we don't know if magic casters or supernatural races are a thing yet, but seeing as a Bleach character is here, good chances it is. MC is a system user, but he went the physical power route, rather than magic.
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I love this series already, its taken some characters from older yet beloved series like dragons rioting and mightiest disciple while sprinkling in new ones like kengan and bungou stray dogs I love the martial arts aspect and how the system breaks it down so its easier to understand I have only two criticsms, first add the martial arts tag and second i think he should explain each technique and series he Sees as some readers may bot be familair with some of the references yet Looking forward to other series being included like baki and Goh, theres hundreds off others as well
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Interesting combination of different martial stories into your own. Though I feel like I should point out something. Whether good or bad is up to the Author. The martial art styles and systems seem to contradict eachother a little. For exmaple Niko Style mixed with Dou & Sei seems like they would be both a good and bad combination. Again just my thoughts, this seems like a a hard balance that youβve struck well.
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Writing Quality: 5β Story Development: 4β Too many girls in the Harem. Character Design: 5β Update Stability: 5β World Background: 3β A mash up of defferent animes.
well i hope this fanfict to be top and not will dropped because i love this fanfict . next your art i'am can't waiting for updatedππππππππππππππ and i'am is the chulture man i love harem hahahaha
This is a great story, I recommend everyone read this since the story starts by grabbing you by the balls wanting you to continue reading it.
Nice Realy really nice Would have written about how nice it was but im on mobile sooo just trust me its nicee ZzzzzzlsldldldΕdΕdΕdΕdlkfkdxlsΔdoslfkkskdeΕdpdpspwldlcldlgΓΆfsΔsΔdllddΕsldΓΆdΓΆdodkelfΓΆwΕspsps
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Its just a good old fashion martial arts fighting story which incoprates alot of the many martial arts anime and manga. Although the title has the word system in it, it isnt really that prevalent to the story
needs more recognition it's good, but it is new so you know ................................................................................
A mega-crossover world filled with martial artist. So far we don't know if magic casters or supernatural races are a thing yet, but seeing as a Bleach character is here, good chances it is. MC is a system user, but he went the physical power route, rather than magic.
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I love this series already, its taken some characters from older yet beloved series like dragons rioting and mightiest disciple while sprinkling in new ones like kengan and bungou stray dogs I love the martial arts aspect and how the system breaks it down so its easier to understand I have only two criticsms, first add the martial arts tag and second i think he should explain each technique and series he Sees as some readers may bot be familair with some of the references yet Looking forward to other series being included like baki and Goh, theres hundreds off others as well
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