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Let's do this one by one. Proper Review. -Writing Quality: 4 The writing is decent. The paragraphs are not clustered and novel is readable. There are a few silly spelling mistakes but they can be ignored. All in all, it is a webnovel that you can read and understand. -Stability of Updates: 4 There are only 15 chapters at the time of this review. Chapters are consistently released till now. 15 chapters in 15 days, -Story Development: 1 -Character Design: 1 There is no deviation from cannon up to this point. The characters have also been dumbed down. The original premise of the story was as baffling as all the others. Guy dies due to getting hit by a truck. Meets some R.O.B and gets 3 wishes. Now you may wonder how someone can ruin this. The character has nothing. The character is literally a blank. Reading about it made me so lost. He thought of nothing. No thoughts concerning any regrets from earth. No thoughts to family and friends. No goals whatsoever. He just decided to roll with it for no reason whatsoever. No reason to become strong. -Character Design: 0 In regards to his power. This is a blatant wish-fulfillment. He creates ninjutsu, bloodline limits and senzu beans out of nowhere. There has been no hint or foreshadowing of a strong enemy. The R.O.B has been shown to be OOC. He behaved more like a child on a sugar rush than some Omnipotent being. The only thing spoken about is the transfer to the marvel universe if his life is too boring. Which it is. The character is doing nothing other than training and following the plot. All Might apparently forgot him while saving the other students... right. Right. -World Background: 3 There has been no expansion. You literally cannot read this if you do not watch or read MHA. The characters have been dumbed down. He apparently lives alone. Not elaborated whatsoever after that. Does his parents being heroes allow him that privilege? We simply do not know. - - - I will be dropping this now. Thank you Mr. Author for sharing this but something like this isn't for me. I am sure there are others who will appreciate this. Have a good day.
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What ? I write this Fan-fic, Of course I like everything about this Fan-fiction. I made this for fun so I don't think you would like this FF.
I dropped this novel had many potentials but you spoiled it. You could have used these abilities and made him a super warrior, but you shouldn't have brought this special nonsense chakra from Naruto without justification.
everything i want to said already said by Ammar_Anwar review, this story barely okay to read at least for my standard and if you don't have novel/webnovel/fanfic to read just try it this fanfic.
Well, first of all the energies and the diferent 'powers'(ninjutsu) just appear without reason or motive, the history is just a dumb kid without knowing what to do with his life, no development of character or the history itself, to little info about how he create his abilities related to chakra, no backgroung knowledge of the mc, his parents died being heroes, he lives alone and there is no explanation about it, weird fabfiction that follow the history from the manga or anime without any change.
It just sucks... The grammar makes it difficult you read as it feels super slow to get through such poor grammar. The OC sucks there is no originality to him he has no reason to be a hero he literally has nothing to make me want to read about him
однозначно мусорный фанфик! Очень расстроился после первых же глав. Ситуация с богом более менее нормальная. Подарки тоже логичные. Ки и психическая сила тоже укладываются в подарки... но потом автор пошел во все тяжкие. Чакра... ПРИДУМЫВАНИЕ ниндзютсу. Он придумал технику запечатывания... я не выдержал. Я бы понял из подарков следует Ки как в драгон боле. Тренировки тела с причудой контроля веса позволят родословной саяна процветать. Но возможность создать чакру была ЛИШНЕЙ. ВСЕ. Прочел 6 глав и бросаю это. Либо пишите более серьезно либо не пишите вообще. Планирования нет... бросаются сцены. Пропускается время и укорачиваются события. Противно читать.
The english is terrible. The Author forgets letters and cant make complete sentences. The Mc’s laugh is like “MUHAHAHAHA.” Author needs to at least learn how to make sentences flow together and make proper sentences. The more complex grammatical errors can be over looked (Examples: “random sentence” / Therefore, I wish you good luck / Dog’s) blah blah blah you get it.
My dislike of the overall story comes from the MC itself. His charcater is plainly not a likeable one. I also didn't like the overall progression of the story. So it's a no for me, feel free to try it how personally this story is nothing above a 3/5.
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Decent Enough storyline but i think you should re write the ninja stuff out keep the Ki theres really no link there and it seemed you Were reaching so u could have cool ninja powers. I also think you should go back through and do another read through A lot of the sentances are confusing making it a hard read otherwise awesome
I haven't read the book àaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjjjj can't believe I need 140 characters ahhhhhhhhhhhh
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I thought it was something original and interesting. But it turned out that this is another Naruto fanfic in the Mha world. Chakra in the MHA world looks ridiculous and is too out of balance. He already has a Saiyan pedigree, observation Haki and a strong quirk.