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Reincarnated with the Country System
4.71 (28 ratings)
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[Scanning completed]
[Host detected. System activated]
“What's going on?”
[Host, I am the system. I will help You Build Your Empire. You have arrived in a world called Proxima Center. It is 10 times bigger than your planet]
In This story, we follow the life of Alberto, a World War II veteran who was killed in action during the war.
But God decided to give him another life. He sends him to a fantasy world. This fantasy realm is ten times the size of Earth, teeming with legendary creatures and vast nations that rival even the might of the Mongol Empire. Where our main character will build his country entirely from scratch using the system given by God. A powerful system that is capable of making him a powerful being
So let's enjoy our main character's journey together.
Join Alberto on his epic journey as he transforms from a soldier into a sovereign, building alliances, facing formidable foes, and perhaps even discovering love amidst the chaos.
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— This story is perfect for fans of fantasy, politics, science fiction, Horror, Conquest, and war and War. If you enjoy complex characters, intricate plots, and richly detailed world-building, then this is the story for you. |
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I love the story. it just needs to work on emotional state of the characters between the FL and ML more. but it is very good and keep up the good work Author and never give up
👏👏👏👏👏👏 Good character buildup and the story is compelling. Can't wait to read more!
This is a great story. Quite remarkable as the story telling and the back ground is well designed. Plus, the writing style is quite simple and goes in a good flow. Great book and will surely enjoy it
This novel literally took me back in time. Nice world, a really impressing sc Fi, almost like fantasy. Good job. Keep up the good work author
i love these kind of stories. keep up the good work :) i will keep reading it and supporting you , author. more give me moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Okay so honest opinion? This book is controversial explaining how some nationalities are beaten and all that, even if its fiction in the latest chap. This feels more like a way to send some sort of message to them, and the story... hmm.. its pretty normal for my taste. System used and world little by little beating them up. The thing doesnt add anything new, or a spice, the story for me. In my most critical view. Is kind of bland, I think it needs more chapters to make it pay off or a better hook and make things make more stakes for the mc
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Hi I just finished reading your story “I want to reincarnate you in another world” and I loved it so much Your writing is amazing and I kept picturing how cinematic it would look as a comic. That intense moment when the protagonist, after a tragic accident, finds himself in a mysterious space where a voice offers him a chance to reincarnate with a country system. The surreal environment and the gravity of the decision add a profound depth to the scene. The atmosphere is thick with uncertainty and potential. The visual potential of this moment would translate powerfully into comic panels. I’m a commissioned artist and I’d love to draw your story into a comic. No pressure though I just think it would look awesome in comic form. If you’re interested message me on Discord (aangelinaa._) and I can share my portfolio with you. Best Angelina
Writing style is abysmall. it jumps scenes here and there even though its not yet completed. A lot of characters are being introduced, but the majority will be forgotten. And does not really have an impact much on the story. Character design is average. But the MC character progression is abysmal one moment he was weak. then sudden surge of power. MC is also indecisive but arrogant at the same time. He was also a hypocrite saying sweet words earlier chapters but was later replaced with cold, uncaring personality. World background is excellent. There are a few plotholes, but it does not bother the story much.
I'll right another review later, your discord links don't work please fix them all
I honestly have been really enjoying the novel so far. It's just fun to read especially in your free time, although the scene swaps do get annoying at some points, it is an enjoyable read if you're able to ignore the comments and all the criticism about how the plot is going. But here is what I'm currently thinking about the novel: The wars The wars up until the Dark Empire were pretty enjoyable to read especially in the later chapters where you can see the natives use their superior knowledge on the local terrain to their advantage, especially with The Devourer, and manage to take out troops The soldiers, mages, and Exo suits I love how you don't make them "unkillable, immortal, unstoppable" instead you make them strong but killable. I've seen in many a novel like this that they make modern troops (like current US troops modern) so unkillable, unstoppable, and make the enemies cower in fear while all of their attacks are useless (As if they couldn't use some sort of guerrilla warfare to combat stronger enemies). But the artificial mages could see more use and more love given to them to at least flesh them out. The Exo suits give a huge amount of Warhammer 40K vibes, but instead of unstoppable plot devices powerful enough to stop a god-powered maniac you made them still easily killable by whatever can overpower their tech. It really shows the limitations the tech has in front of enemies of ancient dark magic. B O A T BigBoat. I got nothing to say. Navy does navy, but nobody wants to be in water. The (God) Emperor! I like the newer him. No matter what others say I like how he is more cruel. His goal is to unite the world against a big threat, and being a conqueror is the fastest way to do it. Not by pushing pencils, rewriting contracts, securing trade treaties, alliance treaties, defense treaties, tech sharing treaties (How one-sided), and formal unification treaties that might aswell take 300 chapters to do. After all, he's prepping the world for a big thing, not "ensuring world stability and the sovereignty of other nations in mutual defensive pacts" No, he's been assigned protector he's gonna do whatever it takes. He's seen the damage the incomplete form could do. He has to prepare everything for the actual battle. so ye. TLDR: iz gud. pls red.
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The story seems good so far, writing is consistent and without extra flair. World building is good, MC is adapting to his surroundings being a 20th century soldier, not familiar with this plot. It gives a feeling of realism.
Good empire-building story, and I like the way everything is presented. The latest developments make me iffy about the dark aspect of him becoming evil, or darker. I like his old personality better and hope this is temporary, and he realizes what he's doing. He's also acting more forcefully, but I feel that's how an emperor would act, perhaps with less assholeness. Everything else is good; I like the feel of this novel. I can't wait to see whom he chooses for his empress, queens, concubines, and maybe mistresses too. I hope he gets the Brit queen; she's smart and crafty. Maybe he can get that resurrection spell to work correctly(for her son) to secure her loyalty, but who knows...
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Such a unique concept. It's kinda an isekai version of Age of Empires. I enjoyed it, especially the battle scenes. However, Alberto and the other characters at early chapters are kinda... bland. Though I took a sneak peek at the latest chapter and I saw a lot of character development from him. Overall, this book has a potential to become a great book.
I must say, I love how the story with the war and everything. I didn't even expect how his reincarnation was. Very original in fact. Keep the good work, Author
The writing quality wavers between really good and some questionable, immersion breaking typos and random capitalization and strange moments in dialogue Overall the novel is good, not my favorite type of novel, but for its genre, it is definitely a gem Give it a try!
I absolutely love the story. The only thing that I don't like is that you keep changing the POV in every chapter, and it keeps throwing me off with the narrative, but overall, I enjoy this kind of novel, and I hope you won't drop it like a lot of authors do!!!