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A young boy feared by other because of is appearance was bullied to death by other.
A god choose to save him due to his ancestry and choose to awaken his bloodline and forcefully reincarnate the boy, without is knowledge, in a world still in the Age of God's.
Disclaimer: I don't own Highschool DxD or any other manga/anime/game cited in this novel / The cover is not my own all right go to is creator
English is not my first language and I do this for fun, don't expect stable release from me.
If you have idea for a better story just write it in the comments
The MC will be strong to stronger maybe even OP but not at the start
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Maid knight idea: Rainbow hair Rainbow eyes Personality: happy when around mc, angry towards those who harm mc (semi-yandere), loves to cook, trains when not attending to the mc(even though she wants to), loves to tailor clothes or scarves Body type: Pale skin equal to perfection Round perky and firm breasts(D cuup) Slender waist like sculpted to perfection Perky yet firm ass 6ft Bloodline - Powers(just a suggestion) Power of the elements (basic level for most) Rejuvenation - heals user or targets as long as there is breath left(depending on injury depends on cost) Immortality - Does not age or decay Oath of a lover - binds body and soul to the one who takes the oath with user (bind them in every life) also prevents rape from any force including gods Teleportation - Allows the user to teleport to a location in sight or where user has been (hidden effect allows her to teleport to the one she took oath of a lover with no matter where)
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Please continue your chapter its really good to watch................,........................ And i like to see what going happen to our MC 🙂🙂🙂☺☺
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Interesting plot 😋. ..... looking forward for new release...,..................... Don't affect by bad comments.......and keep going on your own .......... ........ .......... ......... Good luck with the novel.... And don't drop it
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Although yes it is bad and trash, not to offend you in any way. I would like to see the contination of this novel, with a some more though out things, I know the hardship of even trying to write a story and I commend you to write a story.| And mate, hope your english gets better in the future, grammar and such things that are put into english can make a whole world of a difference for novels. (btw, i'm a novice when it comes to giving reviews and things like that so sorry if a sound stupid.)
the whole story so far it seems to pointless.... i guess your whole story will be interacting with himself or his power which is fine in like max 4 chapters but you doubled it and you were filling the story punctuation marks to make the chapter longer then it is..... Overall your story sucks so far if you keep writing you should fix that
Writing Quality: Trash-tier. I'm not even going to bother explaining this, it should be obvious to any English native who graduated High School. One star. Stability of Updates: Meh, pretty frequent. There haven't been any large gaps. 4 stars. Story Development: Typical wish fulfillment BS. It's not really original or anything, some loser gets a massive power-up out of nowhere and proceeds to act nothing like how he should given his background. The story is forced and railroaded without any real attempt at making the plot progress in a smooth manner. 2 stars, for a somewhat original idea. Character Design: The OC characters are underdeveloped, and what little we have to work with regarding their personalities fail to show in their actions. Loser MC got treated like trash and beaten to death because he looked a little weird, and is now completely OK with his new appearance, no hesitation over not being human, no paranoia over how people will treat him now, when they had already KILLED him for being different earlier. Top it all off, and Seraph, his system guardian angel thing, is one-dimensional. You'd think she'd at least have her own goals or opinions considering she's an actual being and not an AI. One star. World Background: This fic suffers from the same common problems that are present in most fanfiction. The author comes up with "supah cool" ideas for powers, backgrounds of OCs, etc, but he makes no effort to try and explain how it would work in-universe with the pre-existing system of power, laws, and how **** works in general. I can understand some powers being considered outside context and interacting strangely with a world they weren't originally from, but at least give some kind of explanation on how this stuff worked other than, "And then his devil bringer became a Longinus!" It doesn't matter that the Longinus are just a category of sacred gears. It doesn't matter that sacred gears aren't some naturally occurring thing in the DXD-verse, and that they were made by the God of the Bible. It doesn't matter that the only way for his devil bringer to become a sacred gear, and further, a Longinus is if God made the gear, and it was then publicly known and recognized for the power it could grant. Nope, skip any and all explanation, it's a Longinus, plain and ******. It's the kind of lazy writing I'd expect from a 12 year old kid. 2 stars for at least having maybe read the DXD wiki to get a vague enough idea on how things work there. Summary: Meh, if you aren't a native English speaker and are looking for something to kill time while on the toilet, here you go.