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I love the book I hope you are going to keep writing it I think there is so mean things you can do with this please don't drop this book thanks for a great book so far
Dropped :( no updates in a year i wish i had checked before getting properly invested One of the best op mc series ive read and cpuld easily be 500 plus chapters long Unique system, just starting to introduce other characters and potentially a major villain
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I liked up to the part the author decided to nerd the main character and travel 9 years foward. Feels like a cop out because you don't like where the story is going. I didn't like it when fairy tale did it and I'm going to drop it.
It was really good for a good while till he died and then it started to go down hill there,like I know he was a goblin and all and goblins can't help it but did he really have to have sex with the stupid princess? Like come on! I knew something like that was going to happen the first time MC saw her,like Author what's the big deal!? He was doing fine before you just had and made him die and become a goblin and have sex with the princess! It was so good to but you had to go and ruin it! I'm giving it a 3/5 stars instead of 1/5 stars because before all of that happened it was amazing!
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All he do is train but still a weakling. With those Many bull**** skills. And every chapter is Mc is training2x. Haixt. Waste of time reading 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 Mc is hardworking but author just make a lot of op monters
The only thing I would have a great time. The only thing I would have a few days. The first time. It is a good idea. I will have to be a good time. I will
Author should come back and continue or redo the story. 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
Good story....... But need more frequent updates..... I support u You... Personal opinion is can improve more..... You have got good skills..... All the best for your future works..... Good luck.....
This novel is fantastic I love the world and characters I just wish it hadn't been dropped, if you ever decide to keep writing it I'll keep reading it.
Well I've waited a whole month for a new chapter for this novel at the time I'm posting this the author was on 8 hours ago and commented on chapter 1230 of a series I've long dropped but thats besides the point, the point is the author hasn't given a chapter in a month and I'm dropping tyis for wasting my time when I read it a month ago >_> peace out.
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The novel is seem to be dropped, no new chapter after half a year, soon seems to be a different word for author the novel is mostly power trip with unclear goal, just leveling up, the skill and level
Unlike the beginning author has become lazy and the update become very unstable.-------------------------140 character limit............still unable to post.
WHEN IS THE NEXT UPDATED CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-game elements, system, world travel, cultivation, skills, humanoid beasts, time skip, teacher-student relationship. -the mc is close to being crazy before his system came -he trains like crazy -the time is very past -the mc currently has only one relation (man-female)
Its a really good story. But the author lately has stopped updating it for no reason whatsoever. I just pray it has not been abandoned. Char
The biggest issue is the excessive wish fulfilment and power gain without effort. Also, it feels a little like the author wishes they had the will power to spend time improving themselves. The early chapters could have been slimmed down by just saying he ground (skill) to (level) from (level).
This is one of the novels that I like reading and always wait for new ch, some people may think that he gets op way too fast but I like it like this. And I want to see how the story, all the relationships and his powers progress, and also what new things may be discovered in the future.
Supporting this novel. It's great.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Okay this book was legit one of my favourites until it took a bit of a turn for the worse, I think this started at around the point where he goes to the wuxia world. I didn't mind at first from how he interacted with other characters but, these character interactions became in my view a crippling deficit to a all round good book. I dropped around when he met the king in the magic world. Because of two reasons that legit piss me off in any novel they're in because they are stupid (in my opinion). The skill share and how he just randomly statrs helping people and picking up disciples. He meets this random princess out of nowhere, she asks to become his disciple and his like OK, then nstead of truly training her, he just gives her skills he already posses' and the then before in the wuxia world he just helped out two random kitsunes, for no reason and then just gave them skills and also took them back to his world. Everything else is really good, the grammar is amazing, the world-building is cool, the abilities, techniques and system is good albeit a bit too many system notifications. Look I think you can understand why i reviewed so lowly, its because i'm bias to any system novel where the mc has a skill share function, because it is stupid (my opinion) but if you can get past that and the system notifications, second reason but they decreased where i was at in the story, then the rating is an easy 4 or 5
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I have to say, not the best story or characters, but it is enjoyable to read. When i first started reading the story I found myself hooked and could not stop reading. Keep up the good work. The things i would like improved would maybe be the depth of the characters. Maybe getting to learn them more ? :)
Its a really good story with great potential. The only problem is update frequency is very low. Hun? There are more characters needed? Fine!
Author-san definitely spent more time writing the first few chapters than all the remaining chapters combined. MC starts as an emotionally and psychologically complex character but somewhere along the way becomes a mary sue. After a few chapters he's perfect at everything and gets power ups without little to no effort. Also, there should really be a slice of life tag to this story. The MC has no real goal and there's no antagonist or a plot.
Note: Rather than an objective review, this is more like my personal and opinionistic rant. Everything was going well despite the fact that it had no plot and all he did was level up continuously, however, things went to hell when he was suddenly transported to another world. Even that felt nice when he joined a sect, however, things went to the deepest hell when he rescued the cliché beast-woman and her child, and then brought them back to Earth. Oh my god. And they are getting tamed. Can't read anymore!!! However, some readers will definitely find it awesome so I wouldn't advice against reading this novel.
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I love the book I hope you are going to keep writing it I think there is so mean things you can do with this please don't drop this book thanks for a great book so far
Dropped :( no updates in a year i wish i had checked before getting properly invested One of the best op mc series ive read and cpuld easily be 500 plus chapters long Unique system, just starting to introduce other characters and potentially a major villain
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I liked up to the part the author decided to nerd the main character and travel 9 years foward. Feels like a cop out because you don't like where the story is going. I didn't like it when fairy tale did it and I'm going to drop it.
It was really good for a good while till he died and then it started to go down hill there,like I know he was a goblin and all and goblins can't help it but did he really have to have sex with the stupid princess? Like come on! I knew something like that was going to happen the first time MC saw her,like Author what's the big deal!? He was doing fine before you just had and made him die and become a goblin and have sex with the princess! It was so good to but you had to go and ruin it! I'm giving it a 3/5 stars instead of 1/5 stars because before all of that happened it was amazing!
Educate uric chest from octave iffy idrc object exes iffy ictus yeen obligated office idrc octopus full irrigation irrelevant idrc octopus orig Jessi orig Yvette essence ugly urgency these eu tree wifey ictus whey immune
All he do is train but still a weakling. With those Many bull**** skills. And every chapter is Mc is training2x. Haixt. Waste of time reading 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 Mc is hardworking but author just make a lot of op monters
The only thing I would have a great time. The only thing I would have a few days. The first time. It is a good idea. I will have to be a good time. I will
Author should come back and continue or redo the story. 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
Good story....... But need more frequent updates..... I support u You... Personal opinion is can improve more..... You have got good skills..... All the best for your future works..... Good luck.....
This novel is fantastic I love the world and characters I just wish it hadn't been dropped, if you ever decide to keep writing it I'll keep reading it.
Well I've waited a whole month for a new chapter for this novel at the time I'm posting this the author was on 8 hours ago and commented on chapter 1230 of a series I've long dropped but thats besides the point, the point is the author hasn't given a chapter in a month and I'm dropping tyis for wasting my time when I read it a month ago >_> peace out.
Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?
The novel is seem to be dropped, no new chapter after half a year, soon seems to be a different word for author the novel is mostly power trip with unclear goal, just leveling up, the skill and level
Unlike the beginning author has become lazy and the update become very unstable.-------------------------140 character limit............still unable to post.
WHEN IS THE NEXT UPDATED CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-game elements, system, world travel, cultivation, skills, humanoid beasts, time skip, teacher-student relationship. -the mc is close to being crazy before his system came -he trains like crazy -the time is very past -the mc currently has only one relation (man-female)
Its a really good story. But the author lately has stopped updating it for no reason whatsoever. I just pray it has not been abandoned. Char
The biggest issue is the excessive wish fulfilment and power gain without effort. Also, it feels a little like the author wishes they had the will power to spend time improving themselves. The early chapters could have been slimmed down by just saying he ground (skill) to (level) from (level).
This is one of the novels that I like reading and always wait for new ch, some people may think that he gets op way too fast but I like it like this. And I want to see how the story, all the relationships and his powers progress, and also what new things may be discovered in the future.
Supporting this novel. It's great.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Okay this book was legit one of my favourites until it took a bit of a turn for the worse, I think this started at around the point where he goes to the wuxia world. I didn't mind at first from how he interacted with other characters but, these character interactions became in my view a crippling deficit to a all round good book. I dropped around when he met the king in the magic world. Because of two reasons that legit piss me off in any novel they're in because they are stupid (in my opinion). The skill share and how he just randomly statrs helping people and picking up disciples. He meets this random princess out of nowhere, she asks to become his disciple and his like OK, then nstead of truly training her, he just gives her skills he already posses' and the then before in the wuxia world he just helped out two random kitsunes, for no reason and then just gave them skills and also took them back to his world. Everything else is really good, the grammar is amazing, the world-building is cool, the abilities, techniques and system is good albeit a bit too many system notifications. Look I think you can understand why i reviewed so lowly, its because i'm bias to any system novel where the mc has a skill share function, because it is stupid (my opinion) but if you can get past that and the system notifications, second reason but they decreased where i was at in the story, then the rating is an easy 4 or 5
Reveal Spoiler I have to say, not the best story or characters, but it is enjoyable to read. When i first started reading the story I found myself hooked and could not stop reading. Keep up the good work. The things i would like improved would maybe be the depth of the characters. Maybe getting to learn them more ? :)
Its a really good story with great potential. The only problem is update frequency is very low. Hun? There are more characters needed? Fine!
Author-san definitely spent more time writing the first few chapters than all the remaining chapters combined. MC starts as an emotionally and psychologically complex character but somewhere along the way becomes a mary sue. After a few chapters he's perfect at everything and gets power ups without little to no effort. Also, there should really be a slice of life tag to this story. The MC has no real goal and there's no antagonist or a plot.
Note: Rather than an objective review, this is more like my personal and opinionistic rant. Everything was going well despite the fact that it had no plot and all he did was level up continuously, however, things went to hell when he was suddenly transported to another world. Even that felt nice when he joined a sect, however, things went to the deepest hell when he rescued the cliché beast-woman and her child, and then brought them back to Earth. Oh my god. And they are getting tamed. Can't read anymore!!! However, some readers will definitely find it awesome so I wouldn't advice against reading this novel.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.