Robert Crow in the world of magic.

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Poison_Testerman

So the premise of the story is that the MC Isekais into the Harry Potter world at age 18 in 1991, and he'll be attending Hogwarts as an adult. Here's my impression of what I've read so far. Good english, very comprehensible. Update stability, so far so good. The premise is intriguing, and I'm looking forward to see how a grown adult deals with first year classes while knowing the plot. Only bad side, I'd say MC talks out loud to himself way too much.

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Rak

premise of story is somewhat like the hogwards legacy game, only in time of harry potter books the story and grammer and world building is all good, only MC is a bit too easy going, he is an adult(18) working with kids, yet he talks like a teen, acts like a teen most of times and has sudden power ups give it a try tho and see if you like it

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revanchis

I have enjoyed this story so far i hope you keep writing it.

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lector_enfermo

La escritura está bien, el personaje principal puede que no sea del agrado de todos en mi caso no me molesta, eñ concepto es nuevo,en resumen es un buen fic

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Taragorm

The mc ruins this for me. Kinda want to punch him straight in the face. However this is only my personal opinion as i dislike weak and stupid mcs. Especially when theres no clear advantage he will have to make him less stupid and weak. Now the good, this is interesting not seen this set up before, writings spot on, good dailogue and finaly good descriptive writing. felt immersed