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Dont need to read it to know its ****. Author wanted Mc to want luffys ability. So gave it to him instead of mr fantastics ability to stretch without limitation of being unable to swim; one word Author you are being idiotic.
I was liking it until the MC pretty much had an orgasm when he met Captain America I f****** hate Captain America _________________________________________________
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It's a very interesting story, just a bit rushed that's all. Otherwise this is a good read.......................................................
He's awesome. Too bad he entered Marvel before the Civil War. Atleast this Civil War will not be like that of the comics, i hope so (Also it looks that way as the Marvel world he's in seems to be heavily centered around the MCU movies with a bit of other shows/cartoons mixed in (like Spectacular Spider-Man, Ultimate Spider-Man, Avenger assemble etc.)
He really is rubber with that brain of his his rubble isolate everything his brain power and knowledge and how to get rid of people that is your enemy and he is passive as **** he will let people control his life and does nothing like spider robot attract him he just wait it to act him.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Dont need to read it to know its ****. Author wanted Mc to want luffys ability. So gave it to him instead of mr fantastics ability to stretch without limitation of being unable to swim; one word Author you are being idiotic.
I was liking it until the MC pretty much had an orgasm when he met Captain America I f****** hate Captain America _________________________________________________
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
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It's a very interesting story, just a bit rushed that's all. Otherwise this is a good read.......................................................
He's awesome. Too bad he entered Marvel before the Civil War. Atleast this Civil War will not be like that of the comics, i hope so (Also it looks that way as the Marvel world he's in seems to be heavily centered around the MCU movies with a bit of other shows/cartoons mixed in (like Spectacular Spider-Man, Ultimate Spider-Man, Avenger assemble etc.)
He really is rubber with that brain of his his rubble isolate everything his brain power and knowledge and how to get rid of people that is your enemy and he is passive as **** he will let people control his life and does nothing like spider robot attract him he just wait it to act him.
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