Rune Matrix: Programming Magic After Transmigration

too much detail plus the character it seems to be stupid for one to get into subjects that were don't need to be explained such as the magical system I mean just by hearing the name "natural magic (pretty much it's automatic magic then you get from your genetics) creativity magic (lots of flexibility with the downside of being very unstable) rune magic (which is pretty much programming but in magic theme) I miss seriously just by me hearing it I understand it not to mention massive dump you did on the second chapter plus it doesn't even matter or the first two since the user gets going to stick with rune magic which even besides that he use it in a very stupid way more specifically why is he trying to simplify the ruin it technique for absorbing man for one why not you turn our parts of your body into mana vessels such as your bones I meant with his perfect mana control he could just simply cards runes into his bones to saturated and not just that replace it with the mana equivalent to store more mana inside of the bones even heck you could have a mana body in theory with this technique sure enough immediate but it is a way plus you don't need to rely on the mana core anymore sure it will be a big complicated after all you don't need just to condense Mona you also need to wait to break it down and you send mana in your bones which once again shouldn't be too hard since bones do have tons of holes in their body sure not much compared to birds but still their holes and even besides that part why in the world you are doing your job right now? you are in the middle of trying to figure out how to approve yourself doing a job right now is the last thing you need to do (say no by way why in the world the up there need to explain step by step of how his job work for both know it not a important subject right now it just seems to be a useless thing to add early maybe do it when it actually is useful) inside note you ask so much detail I had to skip through most of it so I could actually speed it along to where it is reasonable it always the first sign of what a bad story is to me that has so much detail around it they forgot how to actually do the story sure maybe fine for certain people I guess maybe with people who have ADHD but certainly not for me all together I have to say you make it too bloody long and mind you I was at chapter three three chapters in and I say it is too bloody long the person who gladly listens hundreds of chapters saying it is too long think about that)