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LV 11

Boroxx

Good to pass the time but not recomended if you have something else to do. Just to write a few pro's and con's so that new readers can make it up for themselves if they want to give it a go or not. Pro: -Reincarnator with a system(not too OP not too weak) if you like this trope then this is for you, as the basics are pretty much similiar to the 100 other reincarnated with a system fics ive read. -Cool powers that are rarely used in these types of fics(normaly its often linked to things like "fire fist" "magic fist" "ice fist" in a dull monotone way with some buffs that empower the characters "fists") -I love Gensokyo Cons: -The Author is a rookie, the main problem with this is that the MC changes based on what the author needs at that moment in the plot. Like normaly 1+1=2 or an apple falls from the tree, this is the same in the novel but whenever the author needs it 1+1 can also be 3 or an apple can rise into the sky from the tree. With this i mainly mean that the Author doesnt follow his own settings and things like personality and powers can be changed at will even multipe times in the same chapter for no reason. -The MC. Like stated above, the MC has no personality at all outside of what the author needs at that specific moment in the plot like a shy and insecure otaku, a veteran from a war torn era, like a murderer who kills without blinking an eye or someone who would get severe mental presure at the mere tought of doing something "unethical" like mind wiping someone who saw something he shouldnt see. -Chinanumbawan(China number one) For those that read chinese fanfics would be familiar with this, but for those who dont let me give a few examples. Lets not talk about the MC randomly becoming a dragon race while his strenght increases for a stupid reason like "because my soul is chinese its only normal i become a dragon" But lets talk about their "filial piety" wich is basicly extreme obedience and reverence for parents/grandparents in chinese culture wich everyone is meant to have but the problem is, if your parents tell you commit a crime and you do it your a criminal, if you dont do it your unfilial and have no more place in their society... And like in this fic if there are no parents then a chinese child or a chinese with low self esteem tend to cling onto those who they deem superior to themselves, like a mindless drone following orders. This is especialy clear with the MC here, he desperatly clings to others and never does anything on his own initiative, doing a quest or killing monsters or protecting his friends can only be done by tagging along with others or going on others "orders", going on his own initiative is completely out of the question. on top of that the MC has extremely low self esteem and sees himself inferior to almost everyone. outside of his chinese instinct to follow his "superiors" this is made clearly noticeable in Love Live where he obviously puts the nine muses in a far superior position to himself and he even clearly stated that Maki and Eli have a high status in society thus clearly far above him who has godlike powers. -The Author lays on moments that are ment to be emotional in his opinion EXTREMELY thick. Talking to girls will cause blushing and stuttering, talking about friends is a extreme version of fairy tail friendship power, being sad causes him to shout to the sky and become completely emo etc. Basicly these moments are written far differently from the rest of the novel that even with the MCs constant extreme personality changes it feels extremely over exaggerated and unnatural. PS Dont look at my chapter 6 reading status, for some reason it doesnt sync with my phone wich i read it on.

LV 10

majestikat

The book is pretty good. After Love Live is where it really picks up and that section isn't particularly long. That section starts at ch 5 and ends on 22. Also the book was written over 6 years ago.

LV 4

kreig

worst translating I've ever read but good storyline

LV 4

Roasted_Brenden

I like the story and everything but the author needs a proofreader.There is no consistent with the male and female pronouns for example.