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Second Life's Revenge

Fantasy 137 Chapters 2.4M Views
Author: anlaS0

4.54 (53 ratings)

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"What do you have to say for yourself, sister?"

Tine Alvarado looked down at the small girl whose body was covered with scars. The small girl looked at her hands trembling while all eyes were on her. She didn't understand why this was happening to her, nor didn't understand how this all happened.

"It's not my fault."

"Laura Alvarado the jury has decided to execute you as you have attempted to murder your own sister who is the fiancee of the second prince. And hereby you are found guilty and the court shall be adjourned."

Just like that her life had ended after being falsely accused. Not until she had gone back to life. A second chance to live.

And her second life's revenge.

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    anlaS0
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    I just want to give myself a rating to somewhat start the review section. Anyway, this is my first work in web novel and I hope you enjoyed it. I wished to hear from you guys about this novel and so please leave a review! I will try my best to make the story more and more exciting and so please bear with me. Anyways that's all I want to say bye!

    3yr
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    PsyberRose

    This is a really interesting story with a normal girl striving to not only get revenge, but also improve herself. There are a little twist here and there, which only serves to make the story interesting and will captivate your interest. Writing Quality: Very good with negligible mistakes. Heck, English isn't my first language either and I make even more mistakes than this in my writing. Stability of Updates: Well, just started reading so not sure about it. However, 5* based on good faith and the Author appears serious in keeping steady updates. Story Development: It's good. I like the fact that when she went back to the past, there are changes due to her actions. The butterfly effect is there so essentially, everything is new and different. That is what makes this all the more interesting. Character Design: If you can love and hate a character, then it means a good well done. World Background: I like the world that had been created. At first, I thought it was more of the medieval type, then some fantasy elements were put in. Only thing I was sad about was, instead of drop-dead beautiful and etheral immortal elves, we have the tiny version. No, not the Author's fault. It is this reader who just has an unhealthy obsession with elves. /heh All the best Author.

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    Valorous_Bravery

    this novel is really interesting! it's a bit cliche (sister's feud) but this is more intriguing! i never expected the plot twists and face slapping. i love it when MC does that!. this book excites me to what happens next as well! I look forward to the next chapters!.

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    3yr
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    8kkkkkkkk

    Writing Quality: 4.5 - I liked how the author wrote, but there wasn't anything special or attention grabbing to it. If you know what I mean. Stability of Updates: 5.0 - I don't really know, so I can't judge. However, by this time a lot of chapters have already accumulated so, a 5.0. Story Development: 3.0 - Cliche. This could have been made up for by the writing quality, but the writing quality isn't really special either. Of course, there are a lot of cliches everywhere not just here but I feel the events in this story are especially dull. Get framed by sis, get friendly with mysterious duke, get chosen by weird god who immediately leaves after giving a voice message, get poisoned, yadayadayada. A bit repetitive, you know? Also a bit fast-paced, but otherwise decent. Character Design: 4.0 - Though I understand what the character is feeling, what does the author want the reader to feel? Should I feel pity, or anger, or sadness, or what? The emotions behind the protagonist are clear and shallow. Some advice: I'm not trying to impose, but it would be better if Laura had more of a specific charming aura to her. Right now, I kinda get the innocent, scared, pitiful rabbit with itty bitty fangs feeling. What does the author want Laura to be like? Ex. Melancholy, dangerous loli, mature charm, lonely and scared, consumed by vengeance - these are all decent examples of a clear character type. Right now Laura gives me an ambiguous kind of feeling. Heck, even Tine's hatred is described better than Laura's emotions. World Background: 4.0 - Satisfactory, but not really described. Basically, the only place I have a clear image of is Laura's orphanage up to Chapter 34, at least. Nowhere else is really described, so that removes some points. Plus, not much info is added about world background either. For example, no history, no elaboration on races, the reader only knows that everyone has not black hair and not purple eyes - except for Laura and that's only because Laura is the protagonist. Otherwise I have a feeling these unique features wouldn't even have been added. So yeah. Not a lot of detail, but filled in well. However, despite how nitpicky and naggy I've been this story is honestly pretty good. It's just that I personally don't appreciate the plot. So for anyone reading this review, take mine with a grain of salt. Thanks, Mnerenuk

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    SquareTaco

    it's nice to have a villain that is the blonde hair/ blue eyed person, that is not very common. Laura is truly an impressive young lady. I'm very eager to see how her relationships will grow the second time around.

    3yr
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    MrsSkellington

    Our main character goes back in time with the blessing of a mysterious God after being falsely of murder and sentenced to death. Its clear that your supposed to feel bad for Laura and root for her as she gets her revenge on those who wronged her but I had no sympathy for her. She keeps going on and on about how strong, mature and wise she is since she went back in time but she only went back two years. And her big bad trauma was that her tutor and the maids abused her and she wasn't allowed to see her family(the other orphans). I'd originally felt bad until you start to get the details of it all and you realize that all those things happened to her because she allowed it to. She never told her adoptive father that the tutor was beating her, she never tried to speak up about the maids mistreating her and she never made any attempt to get to know anyone. She hid in her room made zero friends and then wanted to act surprised when no one was willing to stick there neck out and defend her. I'm not saying she deserved to be abused no one deserves that but even after going back she still acts as of the world owes her something because something. You are a stranger no one knows yet you still think people are just going to randomly side with you. Laura is a whiny girl who spends her time crying and shouting that the world is Unfair while doing nothing to change it

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    Bobaholic_girl

    Finally completed reading the novel. Its so interesting that every chapter keeps you on edge. The characters, setting, plot ..everything is just perfect. Keep up the good work Author. ๐Ÿ˜

    3yr
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    alinsyazlin

    At first, the storyline was interesting to read.When i start read this story, fell in love with the character and want to know how she change her life. Curiosity about how laura transformed herself from the weak woman to a strong and villan. How does she want to avenge all the evil that tine did and show to the world that tine is an evil person with a double face.

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    Maria_Martins_6782

    Loved the story but not the end were she leave she should have stayed and built a new world and had should of helped the crown prince heal his hand and brought back his mana in the future but the rest was great

    3yr
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    ArisakiLi

    Hallo! I think itโ€™s good and I hope there will be more updates! but overall I want to praise the author!!! ใ„ใ„ใงใ™๏ผ(^O^) Me from japan also sorry if wrong grammar.

    3yr
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    ky_t15
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    Wholesome story!! plot is great and great storyline!! I can't wait to see more character development all I just wish for a story of Serena and Winston too :<

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    nicolericky

    Well so far it is really good the author to this book I do love reborn stories like these were the person can get a second chance to live and correct the pass

    3yr
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    Abbie32
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    it's a trilling story I like it.... but haaayyy I hate Tineeee๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก keep up the good work....wishing more updates to come...๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน

    3yr
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    Annalee_Moore

    This book has been really fun for me to read. It has given me laughs when i really needed them and it jas been nearly impossible to put down! โค๏ธ

    3yr
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    Na_Mi_3639

    I love these revenge stories and this is Nailing it The characters are Okay but the female lead is an exception I really liked her ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

    3yr
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    Surinder_Kumar_5820

    wow ๐Ÿ˜ณ I m glad to hear about your beautiful novel . ..... about love... love is blind..we can't see it but we can feel it ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

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    Mitty_Kleo

    This is my first review amongst the other novles I readz. The story itself can be boring at times but Iโ€™m still here reading it. ahhaha anyways good job author!!

    3yr
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    bibiyenini

    Nice synopsis and it will intrigue you from the very start you will read it! I must say that you have this reincarnation and mystery thrills even though it was in the genre of Fantasy mixed with Romance! I also love the cover (coming from our fellow author, Chainslock) and you got a million views! Clap ahead, anlaSo!

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    Diana_Jo_Osgood

    Our heroine is awesome the love story is beautiful Friends are awesome The 11th list is an adorable little butt. My only problem with the book is that we don't get enough information on the count's wife we don't get to find out about Laura's parentsAnd we don't get to see the cute baby

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    JELL_IO

    I really loved this story. Seeing Laura focus on her revenge and accomplishing it was just the best. Not only focusing on her love story but Serenaโ€™s as well was really good. Overall it was a satisfactory reading experience.

    3yr
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