Shadow of Ice

the story is good but the author has added various elements in the story where adventure time doesn't have, magic for example is very different from other stories but here we talk about light, darkness, earth, fire and air and various things in short it doesn't keep up to the theory of the original 4 elements, some characters inserted by the user are good but the author does not explain why humans help the outside world (in comics and in the visual world humans do not even leave their city and create robots or technologies capable to do everything for them and they are lazy and hate magical and mutated beings or at least many disgust them) and the thing where humans have fighters is ridiculous they love science to use magic you have to believe that the universe is false and no one let it be true in a nutshell you must have mental problems (adventure time magic works like this) and no character has these problems, we talk about magic as if studying and understanding something like a physical equation where in reality it is not needed, it just needs some requirements- object-text some magic is learned by eating broomsticks, however the story itself is good but it doesn't keep faith with the original story, even simon tied to fin makes you shudder a bit I understand that there is a clone in the crown but having a being tied to the crown capable of knowing everything is strange especially since it should be a very high level in history (in previous lives it was a catalist comet, a butterfly, a blob made of minerals, various creatures that create the cycle of nature thanks to magic man and other things, even the nature of good incarnate has a superhuman strength and has done superhuman feats); well apart from this the story has excellent writing just a few things that do not keep faith with the original story or the various canons, the chapters are too long and there is too much information and it is better to divide them into several smaller chapters, the character is similar to the original only that Fin is more absent-minded about love and things like that even if I explained it to him he would still be slow to understand it emotionally, in addition to these problems here and there it's an excellent read both for how it's written and to read it it's relaxing and not too complicated, the author also has a basic knowledge of the canon, the background of the world is still poorly represented and I think it's under construction, but it's a good read I hope the author continues and is slightly more faithful to the canon or at least needs to be explained why there are such changes