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hi! ever wanted to see an Omnitrix aspect in shadow slave? well you're in luck, I decided to make one.
ben isn't the mc btw, it's an oc.
the writing might suck but I'm sure a lot of you would enjoy the powers I'm giving the mc. so yeah, hope you enjoy
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I don't usually leave review but this Peak shit just read it if You are fan of Ben 10 and Shadow Slave, Writing, Story, Character design and personality is all good. If author keeps updating regularly and not drop it that would be Even more amazing. P.S. Please don't drop it author you are doing good job with this fic.👍
please continue and make it in a fast pace or write more chapters and the mc is way too op nerf him or do anything he is way way way too strong
IT'S PEAK!!! TRULY!!! The aurthor really knows what he is doing. Good grammar, good story development, good character, Good chapter length etc. what could one need more ? Except for more chapters. So, from a veteran reader, APPROVED
This is one of the greatest SS fan fiction that I have read an absolute gem out of all the ff ,all I can this shit is peak
História muito boa........... 👏👏👏👏👏👏 👏👏👏👏👏👏 👏👏👏👏👏👏 👏👏👏👏👏👏 ...............,........... .......................... ......................... ........................
This is the first SS fanfic I've read with Sunny not being MC. The story is entertaining. MC follows Sunny, Nephis and Cassie in forgotten shore. dw there isn't any Hugo x Nephis. Chapters are big 3k-4k. Chapters releases are frequent. MC's progression does not hinder Sunny's progression (Sunny still got blood weave) Would recommend.
OK so far your writing is nice, MC power nice, so im looking forward to this guys journey. Now the only thing left is MC personality/ambition. Im fine with him being friends with the main cast, but if all he does is follow them around like how sunny does with Neph then this would be boring since i already read that. I read fanfics to see a different world view like someone just doing their thing in that world n just making carzy stuff up ya know. i already know everything that could happen follow neph. im like 90% sure MC will land in FS, and im ok with him being with sunny and them but if all he does is join their chort then this would be boring. Im at chapter 12. He has a conquers EGO so honestly my worries might be stupid, but most writers F up here. start ur own chort then ur own clan that would be cool. just please make it where he has a reason to fight the other clans other than Neph is doing it. keep it up tho this is super nice
IT'S PEAK!!! TRULY!!! The author really knows what he is doing. [img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten]
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Absolute peak fiction , keep doing fresh new interesting story developments and never nerf mc . It was rough early on but after the group of 4 comes together so does the story , the eldritch guest mini arc is really memorable and I hope you keep going with stuff like this . Really appreciate the long chapters and great upload schedule , I ll give you all my stones
This is so peak that I was literally kicking my feet and grinning ear to ear from excitement over how good it is. It feels like I'm reading SS all over again. Keep up the great work😄.
very entertaining and has a good story profession please do not drop it and countinue uploading
The story is really good so far i just hope the author doesn’t drop it randomly.
It has been so long since I've given a review, but it's about time—this novel is good and deserves it. The Writing Quality is very good, and the same goes for Stability of Updates; after all, we get a chapter a day. Story Development could've been better, but the author is doing well. The Character Design is perfect for the world of Shadow Slave—it doesn't feel like he shouldn't be there. And for the World Background, well, it's Shadow Slave, so what could you expect other than peak?
Very few if any complaints so far. I’ll admit my expectations were low after sifting through so much terrible Ben 10 fanfiction on this app but I think I would have been pleasantly surprised regardless. Though the story does follow a relatively generic and predictable format (kinda hard to avoid this early on due to the progression system of ss), I think the first nightmare was written very well and I like the way the omnitrix’s abilities and Ben 10 lore have been adapted so far. Will definitely keep reading.