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First Fanfic, I pretty much have no writing experiences and I’m just doing this being I had that idea stuck in my head for a long time and couldn’t get it out. I’m trying new things.
She was once a girl from earth. Unfortunately, she died at the young age of 19. Not accomplishing her dreams in life. She gets reincarnated as a man named ‘Faith’ and lives in the world she’s in now. The world of RWBY. Unfortunately, she has no prior knowledge of her previous life and doesn’t know this world is of fiction.
I’m going to put him in team CVFY.
I’m also going to change a bit and not completely follow the timeline. Btw acquiring the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan and Rinnegan will not be by the norms.
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This is a FanFic so I don’t own the characters.
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Great work so far I’m curious how the sharingan will be used since there are no ninjutsu to copy the character so far isn’t a soy boy so I’m happy I’m curious how this will develop so thanks for the work man
First, the writing is kind of choppy wity the pace. The first few chapters are confusing and not much is explained. All we really know is that the MC was in a dark place and then suddenly gained the sharingan. The story is virtually nonexistent, the only thing really established is faunus discrimination thats kind of abandoned halfway through the story. The start is extremely fast, and if you skip a sentence you'd probably be a bit lost. I was actually confused on how the MC saw all of those bandit's memories until it was said later his semblance was seeing dead people's memories. The only thing good about the story is the fight scenes and even those seem a bit bland with a lack of story The MC, Faith, doesnt really have much of a character, hes mostly just a blank sheet. It says that he was a girl in his past life but it doesn't really elaborate beyond that. His personality is not well done, all we know is that he dislikes the tension between the Faunus and Humans, but thats honestly it. His romance with Velvet feels pretty forced as neither of them know virtually anything about eachother. All he really does is replace Fox in team CFVY and doesnt really ad much to the story. His relationship with others could definetly be elaborated on. The idea of the story is really good but horribly executed, the story is rushed, the MC is not explained, and the sharingan is kind of stupidly done.
I kinda forgot to do the tradition of an author writing a review so here it is.Just a guy writing a review. Yeah just a review that has nothing to do with the story. An unnoticcable review that will not impact the story at all. I swear. On my life.
Its quite nice for now and I'm quite interested on how the story will progress so keep it up Author...XD..................................................
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