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Arielle is a cursed omega beautiful, kind-hearted, and courageous she is a member of blue moon park, a park where Alpha maltreats and abuses his omegas rather than protect them he uses them in the battle to lessen their population in the park, although Arielle has never been to war she was aware many omegas that have lost their lives thus leaving their family without a head and their mates broke.
Born on a blood moon night Arielle had to carry the burden of been cursed on the day gods shred blood of their kind on the same night both her parents died.
Growing up she lives with her aunt May who is an omega just like her parents.
Arielle is not maltreated by her park members because of her friendship with the beta's son Jedidiah, but she has to endure been a slave to treize the Alpha, although her aunt worked in the park house kitchen when treize father was alive, she continued even after he passed because treize didn't like change thus she continued as the cook.
But because of treize insecurities, he made Arielle his slave to watch her development cause there is something different about her
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Arielle never had a problem with kneeling before the Alpha but today a force won't let her kneel and a voice in her head kept on yelling"DON'T" not kneeling before your Alpha means you want to have a manshidano; challenging your Alpha to a duo of which there must be only one winner.
That's the last thing on her mind now if she loses, she will have to leave the park, her aunt and her friends even the park has always been a part of her plans, it didn't have to be like this in shame and if treize is too strong for her he might kill her and it would be justified.
She could only pray inwardly to the goddess to create a distraction for her, and just like magic treize turned his head from her half bent body to stare into the wall and for the first time she used her ability to dive into his mind and discovered he was been mind linked by beta joe "Alpha you are needed urgently" he said treize turned away from her towards his bathroom and said in a low tune"we'll continue this later".
Arielle inhaled deeply and exhaled she straighten up herself and thank the goddess for saving her but she wondered why the force stopped her from kneeling, was the voice her wolf's and why did she stop her she had never heard from her wolf before cause she has not been able to shift, her eighteenth birthday is at the corner is that why she's having these feelings she wondered as she continued her chores.........
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The descriptions and details were great! I can visualize everything as I read along. One thing I should add is explain more about the world building and start with the vocabs. I know what Alpha and Beta is, but I am not a big fan of this genre enough to know what omega means, so by explaining these simple words can bring you a variety of readers.
This story has great potential. Though if you be more careful, it will only get better. But otherwise, good word. Keep working on it. It will be great!
It's a slow burner. Loads of narration, few dialogs. The English is good but could be better. The plot is good and I liked the concept. Perhaps you'd like it too. Give it a shot.
The werewolf genre is very tuff to break into but this book has the potential to it. The charecter Arielle is very life because of her emotions protrayed perfectly. The plot and story are great but the writing should need some edits here and there and with a proper format, this book would be great.
I'd like how you utilize your words to express explosive thoughts. Moreover, you vividly narrated the world building. Good job! Also, it's well written not too fast and not too slow. Keep up the good work! Your novel is a master piece.
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Now, this is a novel with eye-catching scenarios. Making me have goosebumps as I read. Splendid executing the novel, not all can do it! Kudos! ADVICE Continue writing and improve more! That's all! The author is a native English speaker and a better author than me..... kudos!
The concept is great! It shows a lot of descriptions needed for the story (world building) plus the characters involving inside the plot. There are some grammatical erros in the story, but that's alright! The story is still there, and this book is amazing!
I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.
Very well done. I totally enjoyed the novel! Excellent writing skills, please do not stop posting new chapters! The plot is epic but most of all, the character growth is really well done! Excellent novel!
I love your book’s concept! I think it’s very interesting and enjoyable to read. I honestly had fun reading it! My only critique is to work on your grammar a little more. If you fix those minor details, then I definitely think this novel could be one many will love reading! Overall, very amazing work author!!!
This story is so interesting! The main character's name is so beautiful. But I'm gonna give you an honest review because this novel has a great potential and I know you can make it even greater than this. I think you need to pay more attention to use capital in the beginning of the sentence and after the period mark. And you also need to pay more attention about the punctuation marks. I believe this book will be better with your amazing skill! [img=recommend]
This is one of the best novels i have come across. the Description are so vivid and interesting. The story development and plot is unique! Keep it up author