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Would have rated it higher but the final chapter ruined it by rushing everything at once, should of actually completed the story in a series of chapters even if releases where slow instead of a everyone traveled and maxed out while claiming a few more women
Hey can you continue this novel please? ITs good im not gonna lie i like it A lot im pretty most of the readers did. ....’.&:!:&’,!;!:&/&.’,!:!:
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Reveal Spoiler A good story with a nice beginning. Too bad it is discontinued for such a long time..... It is almost one year already!!!! Why you stopped updating this story, authooorrrr????
This Novel is hiatus for now and I don't have any plan to continue it yet. Currently focused on my other novel in Bahasa Indonesia: Kumpulan Hasrat (R18+)
The Last Update was June 29,2018, I waited for 8 months and currently it's March 20,2019 now, to only found out that this novel which I liked went on hiatus. Fvck 8 months I going to wait a year to see if this returns, Feels bad man, This 140 characters when writing a review really sucks, It really sucks. Srsly. Fudge. FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK
Funny story. Was going in the right direction until it stopped. I thought it was pretty entertaining. Main character wanting to be a trap was funny. Main character way too strong for every one else however, so a bit boring on that side.
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The start was ok. But quickly got a bit weird. If you like that kind of stuff you will enjoy it.Trap a with a bit of tentacle.I didn't make it very far since not into those . MC gets op really fast . Too fast like the first chapter. plot is interesting, story well I'll skip that since it already left my reading interest.
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Great Story, Love the story line and character. There are good character development and I love the the trap. It a good novel because of the MC intelligence is much high and know what he is doing. Great Novel keep it going.
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great story i love his ability and the fact h is a TRAP it is hilarious I hope this story is going to be a long one but it is funny and cool already so I have my hopes up please don't disappointing me Author-san no. Author-sama!!!!!
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very very very very good story I a specially like genderbender/trap/reverse trap is isekai main character but why did you stop please continue
Reveal Spoiler Would have rated it higher but the final chapter ruined it by rushing everything at once, should of actually completed the story in a series of chapters even if releases where slow instead of a everyone traveled and maxed out while claiming a few more women
Hey can you continue this novel please? ITs good im not gonna lie i like it A lot im pretty most of the readers did. ....’.&:!:&’,!;!:&/&.’,!:!:
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
https://***.webnovel.com/book/13090758906702505/Kumpulan-Hasrat-(Bahasa)#review https://***.webnovel.com/book/13090758906702505/Kumpulan-Hasrat-(Bahasa)#review https://***.webnovel.com/book/13090758906702505/Kumpulan-Hasrat-(Bahasa)#review
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Reveal Spoiler A good story with a nice beginning. Too bad it is discontinued for such a long time..... It is almost one year already!!!! Why you stopped updating this story, authooorrrr????
This Novel is hiatus for now and I don't have any plan to continue it yet. Currently focused on my other novel in Bahasa Indonesia: Kumpulan Hasrat (R18+)
The Last Update was June 29,2018, I waited for 8 months and currently it's March 20,2019 now, to only found out that this novel which I liked went on hiatus. Fvck 8 months I going to wait a year to see if this returns, Feels bad man, This 140 characters when writing a review really sucks, It really sucks. Srsly. Fudge. FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK
Funny story. Was going in the right direction until it stopped. I thought it was pretty entertaining. Main character wanting to be a trap was funny. Main character way too strong for every one else however, so a bit boring on that side.
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The start was ok. But quickly got a bit weird. If you like that kind of stuff you will enjoy it.Trap a with a bit of tentacle.I didn't make it very far since not into those . MC gets op really fast . Too fast like the first chapter. plot is interesting, story well I'll skip that since it already left my reading interest.
Reveal Spoiler Great Story, Love the story line and character. There are good character development and I love the the trap. It a good novel because of the MC intelligence is much high and know what he is doing. Great Novel keep it going.
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great story i love his ability and the fact h is a TRAP it is hilarious I hope this story is going to be a long one but it is funny and cool already so I have my hopes up please don't disappointing me Author-san no. Author-sama!!!!!
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very very very very good story I a specially like genderbender/trap/reverse trap is isekai main character but why did you stop please continue
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