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Leave this novel. It's dead...
It was my take on a chinese translated novel, but i kinda regret it
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Pretty good so far, the writing quality is good. The fast-pace doesn't feel rushed, rather it's effective. It's a little bit rough, but like author said, he just upload it and plans on editing it afterward. The only thing that'd bug me so far would be the world background, but I guess since it's only the beginning, all of that will be further developed in the future. The story's quite intriguing, too. The story has potential--I mean, i'm no expert, that's for sure, but from what I see, it has potential to grow well if author keeps it up. Good job.
You shouldn’t Have c*cked the MC… story was going great until you made that Annie be f*cked by someone els… You’ve lost this reader
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This novel is below average and fast paced one, but still understandable also the mc is looking for his ex not knowing he already got c*ck im also confuse why the author make the mc care for her only to get r*p*d in the next dozens chapters
Leaving a review to the fun, fast-paced novel. You can say this is more of a 'light novel,' just from thoughts, the author colours his world. Just from the character talking to himself, revealing his feelings. I don't play too much with the system but every system I read is great and makes me go, "I wish i have a system to fawn my crush," and this novel had it. Keep on writing, story have to be told and ends.
quite an intriguing system novel which is quite unique. The world-building is also interesting because the world is built by the mc himself which makes it very interesting to read. The pacing is well done and the humor is also not dry like other system novels. Best of luck to the author
Good book. Easy read, the story picks up right from the beginning. The main character Carter seems like an interesting person but he needs much more developing. Overall, it's quite a decent book, highly recommended. Kudos to the author.
Blatant plagiarism, the original story was barely tolerable, but this is complete trash.
Their is a novel like this still in raws. It should be its original. This novel is like the originals fan fiction. Everything is the same except the r rated scenes and the ntr. Check it out. The world building is great too.
Man can you save his girlfriend in the next 20-40 chapters please it makes me feel really depressed for some reason and makes me cringe also i put 2 power stones
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Very interesting and intriguing story! The writing is good and the story development is fine too. It has potential, although im not that good at judging a book. Good luck, dear author💜
i like this book even though the genre isn't my taste. The author had done a great job to make me want to know more and read it. so I hope the author will keep writing
