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I've recently come across this hidden gem and let me tell you, it's really surprising. It's like a slice-of-life pace and style version of Log Horizon, Reincarnated as the Strongest Sword God, Picking Up Girls In a Dungeon, Overlord and the list goes on. You can absolutely tell that he gets inspiration from D&D and/or Pathfinder formats and it's well thought out and not carried away like some novels. Score is low because the world building hasn't occurred yet but at this point of the novel, I think it's about to go there. Verdict: Read Whenever You Can.
This book is amazing, keep going!Β Β Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Hi, This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your βSilverhart Onlineβ, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via geekyteddyyo@gmail.com, then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan
Grammar is bad but readable. There are some interesting twists but a lot of things are given to make MC OP for no reason. Dialogue is a bit sucky and pretty much all character interactions seem a bit unnatural. It's meh quality, a bit better than the average braindead Chinese protagonist but still not that good. grading 3.6~3.7
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alright. this sounds like just another isekai story, and it is. but it is also a bit unique in that it gives a distinct elder scrolls vibe. the story is decent or even nice, but the writing is truly atrocious - which makes it a true elder scrolls experience.
I feel this story is trying too hard at making the world to fascinating fantasy with simple things i could make it up to 50 without doing something else to make the cringe go away.this type of story building is not for me so way and the way they talk with each other is like they are talking to their in-laws family for the first time.
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This is a great book with so many plot twists and the occasional moments of the MC being a savage, which I love. I also like that the MC is a very smart person who isn't trusting, and I also like the relationship he has with his younger sister.
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This is a really great book with the theme of magic and isekai which I appreciate so very much. I like how the MC makes so many reliable friends and I also like how he has the drive to become stronger by all means possible
This novel is perfect for beginners in light novel reading. A light emphasis on describing characters and enviroment. Room for improvement but definetely worth reading.
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Since this is the 10th review, I suppose I should be giving myself one in order to finally show the ratings. This novel is inspired by the games that I have played in the past such as Dragon Age, Skyrim, Kingdom of Amalur, Neverwinter Nights, and other RPG games. If you fellas are looking for an RPG based story where the MC progresses systematically in a fantasy-driven world, then be my guest and read my story. Most importantly, I hope you fellas enjoy!!
I've recently come across this hidden gem and let me tell you, it's really surprising. It's like a slice-of-life pace and style version of Log Horizon, Reincarnated as the Strongest Sword God, Picking Up Girls In a Dungeon, Overlord and the list goes on. You can absolutely tell that he gets inspiration from D&D and/or Pathfinder formats and it's well thought out and not carried away like some novels. Score is low because the world building hasn't occurred yet but at this point of the novel, I think it's about to go there. Verdict: Read Whenever You Can.
This book is amazing, keep going!Β Β Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hi, This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your βSilverhart Onlineβ, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via geekyteddyyo@gmail.com, then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan
Grammar is bad but readable. There are some interesting twists but a lot of things are given to make MC OP for no reason. Dialogue is a bit sucky and pretty much all character interactions seem a bit unnatural. It's meh quality, a bit better than the average braindead Chinese protagonist but still not that good. grading 3.6~3.7
Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
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Reveal Spoiler alright. this sounds like just another isekai story, and it is. but it is also a bit unique in that it gives a distinct elder scrolls vibe. the story is decent or even nice, but the writing is truly atrocious - which makes it a true elder scrolls experience.
I feel this story is trying too hard at making the world to fascinating fantasy with simple things i could make it up to 50 without doing something else to make the cringe go away.this type of story building is not for me so way and the way they talk with each other is like they are talking to their in-laws family for the first time.
Reveal Spoiler I just say I real **** with this book this **** got me Wildβn out jit this **** top notch ***** damn sorry if you From Florida you know what Iβm talking aboutοΏΌ
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This is a great book with so many plot twists and the occasional moments of the MC being a savage, which I love. I also like that the MC is a very smart person who isn't trusting, and I also like the relationship he has with his younger sister.
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This is a really great book with the theme of magic and isekai which I appreciate so very much. I like how the MC makes so many reliable friends and I also like how he has the drive to become stronger by all means possible
This novel is perfect for beginners in light novel reading. A light emphasis on describing characters and enviroment. Room for improvement but definetely worth reading.
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Since this is the 10th review, I suppose I should be giving myself one in order to finally show the ratings. This novel is inspired by the games that I have played in the past such as Dragon Age, Skyrim, Kingdom of Amalur, Neverwinter Nights, and other RPG games. If you fellas are looking for an RPG based story where the MC progresses systematically in a fantasy-driven world, then be my guest and read my story. Most importantly, I hope you fellas enjoy!!