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A youth named Cheng Xuan has lived a hard life as a working student.
After he entered high school, his parents died, and during his first year in college, he became a working student.
After a lot of setbacks, Cheng Xuan turned 22, and understood why his parents worked hard for him and now wants to live up to their expectation.
Sadly, he was soon spirited away to another world where the powerful use violence and cruelty to rules over everything.
With his desire to live a fulfilled life in a world of danger, Cheng Xuan now has a chance to fulfill his late parents wishes.
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Hey man, I've stumbled across your work so I payed a little visit. From what I've seen so far, you may want to consider asking a proofreader or editor for help. Your work suffers from basic grammatical errors and some parts could have been worded much better. To be honest, I'm not eager to read any more than what I've read so far. The premise of the story inspires a promise, yet I find it hard to be engaged to the story and the structure of the novel seemed weak. Please do not consider this as an insult. I just want you to know what I think about the current state of your work, and the problems/nitpicks I have with it. I hope you take this constructive criticism well and work hard to make your works better. Wishing you good luck and I'm eager to see how your works will turn out. Cheers!
Very interesting story. The only issue I've seen is a couple of grammar ,spelling errors and a plot hole but compared to most other stories I've read it's pretty negligible. The character has a bit of a hero personality which I hope he grows out of as I enjoy more action personally. So yeah if you're looking for a mass murdering guy who offends everyone then this story isn't for you. However, if you're looking for an engaging story with a rational MC then this story is for you.
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good but please stop using multiple perspectives to deliver plot it takes what I think we all want to read a story with a main character that has the ability to become strong rather than, being strong because of reasons and turns it into a slugfest with no end in sight. personal pet peeve when the mc goes to a new area don't forget that so far cultivating is hard as hell for normal people and throwing a thousand and one high-level cookie cuter bad guys that in the last place would have been fully completed takes time from everything else and breaks immersion from the good and makes the bad really stand out.
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After reading to the latest chapter...I have to say this story really has potential and it'd be a shame to abandon it. The MC has a unique personality and isn't egoistic. His actions and the other characters actions really bring flare to the storyline. Besides one plothole and a few grammar issues I'm giving this story a 4.8/5.
I like the premise, and am just about to start reading it. I hope you don't drop it, and from what I see in the reviews, you would benefit from re-reading your work. However, I like the story idea so don't drop it!
It's a good start, please continue! Dhdjjdjjejshdshnsmdkdksskdjdnjdjdhdhdbzmfkakfiwhyjhrl3bfajfjapruzywpd74sjrjfitkdoejsit8eueuruduruejdkdkskskwlejehsysyqiqojququwahswj
Was a Interesting concept but Ruined by plot holes in story. First hard to know MC strength if there are no stats. Also thought it was dumb he wasted the soul of purity on the wolf, even after gaining more True energy he dosen't get it back? Your excuse he realized that he killed a ''innocent'' wolf dosen't make sense. When he killed Frank he didn't feel a thing so killing a wolf that was trying to attack him a few moments ago made him feel guilty but killing a some random guy made him think that it was fine as he was always a little evil because of horror films? What a contradiction, you also seem to have completely forgot about the demon infant the MC gained? Its a demon infant of depravity and bane should it not affect the MC mentally when he was per say torturing the mortals in your latest chapter? The wolf soul the MC gained is supposed to allow him to gain their skills then why is it he dosen't have lightning skills? Also there should be a cultivating method or some kind of manual I mean if all is needed to cultivate is to visualize and a lecture then dosen't that mean anybody can do it? In the end lots of gaps and holes in your story