Intriguing. Not informed about the characters appearance 5 chapters in. No set year. Quality of writing could be better but for me the story is more important. Glasgow is too vague. Saying the British/Scottish City Glasgow would've been better as not every knows where Glasgow is.
Intriguing. Not informed about the characters appearance 5 chapters in. No set year. Quality of writing could be better but for me the story is more important. Glasgow is too vague. Saying the British/Scottish City Glasgow would've been better as not every knows where Glasgow is.