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A master takes a stroll in the lower world. On his way he sees an orphan with a fragile body being beaten and bullied.
The orphan, Luo LianHao doesn't ask for help nor does he seek it. The master takes it as an encounter of fate and leaves Luo with a gift. Now he has been marked by fate. A journey of twists and turns that will change the nature of his very soul awaits him. An orphan who rises to the top, to become the sovereign.
In the upper world , a goddess has blocked her cultivation to enter the lower world to find her destined one. She carries a heavy destiny, one that is envied by even the martial gods. Who will be her destined one and can he bear the weight of the fate she carries?
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Wonderfully worded, beautifully told and completely exhilarating. The author is doing a fantastic job telling this story. Every word describes what is happening so purely, so beautiful that it’s easy to envision. The author is giving the readers something to see and feel. Not just read. Read it! Dear author, I have a question for you. If you don’t mind. 🙂
Poetic, beautiful and moving. This book has everything going for it and more. I love it and I'm sure any fan of fantasy will as well. The vocabulary is vast and the writing quality is consistent.
The start of the story is good. The use of grammar is impeccable and the writing flows smoothly. A boy shunned and looked down upon by everyone will now show the world what he is capable of. The skillful writing of the author is sure to deliver this story to us in the most beautiful way! Can't wait to read more!!
A classic example of a good cultivation story. The writing is good and its easy to read and understand. A good example of a rags to riches story what I like more then the basic OP MC
Good introduction, the meeting between the protagonist and mentor was humorously rendered. The plot develops quickly and there are endnotes to guide the reader so that they won't be too overwhelmed by the many new cultivation terms. Lots of action and some smooth moves were depicted too. (YY clap was pretty cool)
the storyline is very interesting. i would suggest using adequate paragraphing. even though there are a lot of cultivation novels, this one is very interesting. Waiting for more.
This book is really well written. The start is unique and what I love is that. The MC has to fight for his things. It's not like his first cheat is the best in the universe. There are some grammar mistakes but nothing proofreading can't fix. Although the capitalization of letters can be a bit annoying Great story keep it up.
Well, I personally enjoy the novel as it does not lean too much on the typical tropes so far, there are some but not much. There is also how the MC is not a typical protagonist as the author does something different. I do not want to spoil it, so just give it a read
A catchy story indeed ,this is wonderful I could only read 5 chapter and from that I loved the way this author presented his /her characters .The pacing is quite impressive keep it up!![img=update][img=update][img=coins] I highly recommend this book, a total score to this.
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It's a great cultivation novel, with promising Storyline. The author should consider using adequate paragraphing, by writing different conversations on different lines.
There is a lot of cliche in that novel, that cliche we all love. A boy is unable to cultivate due to somebody problem, a master that reforges his body to allow cultivating, and a dedicated MC. What else do you want more? Just go and read. The only problem I found in this novel is that it had too many long paragraphs, maybe it's just my eyes but I would like to see some breaks to make things easier.