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This is my first attempt at writing a fanfiction, so any ideas or correcting is most appreciated. I work two jobs and have school so don't know how often I can update.
Synopsis: *sigh* I'm tired of all of this shit. Everyday the same old shit day in day out. All I want to do is play halo and watch starwars. Man fuck college and fuck work they both suck. *ding dong* I wonder who that can be. (Stranger) There has been a major gas leak and you need to leave the complex now. *KABOOM*
I DON'T OWN HALO OR STARWARS
I am just trying my hand in writing a fanfic mostly because I am bored and just enjoy fanfics. I don't have a lot of time on my hands so I appreciate any ideas or comments on how to better the fanfics.
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I think it's an interesting concept but it's not well put together. You make spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes. Making the story a little hard to read. I honestly think it can be a good story but you're probably not the best for writing it.