Stage of oddities : A wacky world

Act 0 — A manipulative act (Prologue)
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Noel, preoccupied with personal concerns, finds himself relatively at ease in the urban environment of Nanome. Like many, he is aware of the lurking dangers of the world. In Nanome, a country considered the safest on the continent for its inhabitants, the supernatural is acknowledged but remains a marginal concern in the public eye, with its existence even doubted by skeptics. For Noel and many others, the supernatural has always been a distant, irrelevant concept. However, this perception shifts abruptly on the day he visits a shopping center.

Unbeknownst to those present, an imminent disaster is about to strike, similar to a hurricane emerging on a sunny day, unexpectedly. In just under two hours, their lives will be diminished to nothing more than fragile threads, easily broken.
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Note
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- Chapters will range between 1500 and 4000. (Sometimes more, if I can’t come up with a satisfying enough ending.)

- Hints in every chapter.

- Established power system

- Grim with a bit of irony

I welcome constructive comments that can help me improve specific areas of my writing. I’m talking about chapters comments not star rating.