/ Movies / STAR WARS: The Jaeger Saga
Synopsis
The captain of a Imperial-Class Star Destroyer and leader of an elite group of soldiers known as the Red Death, William is tasked with fighting rebels within the Empire's territory. But after a series of events, he may question his duties as well as the Empire he is loyal to.
Tags
You May Also Like
Share your thoughts with others
Write a reviewA very good fanfiction. The backstory creation is great so far. Hope this keeps going without him reaching an epiphany and joining the rebels out of the blue.
Needs editor to many Times you say he is doing something then next sentence say same thing To descriptive in his actions when it's something simple Mcs reaction isn't realistic when talking to that rebel guy The females reaction of laughing on the floor isn't realistic You havnt stated at which period mc is during the empire Pretty much 0 information on the mc this decreases readers ability to connect with your novel
Author The_Arc1t3ct
Classic!! A man who defect empire and thanks for literally saying it at the title you don’t even need a synopsis. Tooo cliche extreme cliche unless you have perfect grammar and writing skills book will fail so think again if you wanna continue