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What do you do if you stranded in an unknown place, unknown world, and unknown thing? Of course! try to cultivate!!
Nah, of course not...
You won't do that of course, not like you are an idiot that likes to be died and relax when you know the world you're in is a massive wreck, a place where nothing is fixed...
Such is what'll happen in the story, as the Main Characters live their life in a place like anime world, with and thru their own pace, and their own place...
met with each other and compete with each other at their own pace...
sadly, there's no 'at their own pace' in this world, as the story will develop more and more into the unexpected. and then...
*Note, this is fanfiction from now on~~ lol
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I give you 5 star .because i like you (not gay) ................................................................................................................
Haven't read yet which I don't think I am supposed to do but well I feel you should have put it under fan-fic but it is your choice in the end so who cares right?
Hey hey, author here! I'll shamelessly write a review about my works! It's one of my late works in other platform, although it is a fanfiction in the other platform, here the story will develop more than a fanfiction, as only the early part will start in Naruto world albeit in the past and mostly another part of Naruto world or another fanfiction of naruto. As the story develop the Naruto part will start to dwindling and stopped altogether... Well, there might be some part or thing that'll still be used. But, let's see where the future lies...
i have not read even the first chapter but the starting line made me laugh. i totally imagined gintama anime where gintoki and his friends are stranded on an island... hahahaha hit like if you remembered the same seen.
Writing quality: Atrocious, reads worse than google translate. Stability of updates: pretty good, considering you released 24 chapters in five days. Story development: I can see were the story is heading, but because of the poor grammar, it becomes hard to really understand what is going on. Character design: You need to flesh out your characters, I don’t feel a connection to any of them( might be due to your poor grammar). World background: I notice you did try and give us some info on the world Mc is in. Again really poor writing. Over all you have a good idea, just really poor grammar. The chapters get confusing, especially when the timelines are not in order. I had a headache deciphering each chapter. I usually stop reading a novel if the grammar is bad, but because your story was so interesting I did not want to stop reading. Please get a beta or try and edit your chapters.
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