Tales Of Eldora

I am fairly new to writing so hope everyone likes it I will try to release at least once a day. Planing on building up a reserve of chapters for regular releases if there seems to be interest. Please leave comments and tell me what you think always willing to take ideas from others.

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"{talking}"
'{thinking}'
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The land of Eldora, Filled with magic, knights, beasts, monsters, and corrupt nobles. Follow Ray, a reincarnated
fire captain now Rainer, with his heroic ideals, born as the Third Prince of the Atitis Kingdom. On his journey he will find new friends, love and betrayal, as he rises to become the emperor of flames.
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!SIREN!
(Fire company 155 arrives at the scene of an apartment fire. The captain's radio buzzes)

"Fire Company 155, come in!"

!chk!

"This is Captain Ray of the 155; what's the situation."

!chk!

"Captain Ray, there are reports of a missing girl, Elena, five years old, in unit 306B on the 3rd floor."

!chk!

"Copy that."