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Write a reviewWhile I can't say anything about the direction of the story I can say the quality is top notch. Characters are developing really well and everyone mentioned is fleshed out even though it's just the early chapters. This story has a lot of potential. Chapters are also around 2k words so it's almost like your reading a contracted novel. That's how good it is. Take the time out of your day and read this. You won't regret it.
Going by the latest chapter, Pros: Author has high readability, good sentence variation. Passive voice is kept low. Cons: 12 long sentences found in latest chapter. 10 (30-39), 2 (40+) and author has a tendency to overuse words such as WAS. I would recommend readers to take a look, all the best!
While I can't say anything about the direction of the story I can say the quality is top notch. Characters are developing really well and everyone mentioned is fleshed out even though it's just the early chapters. This story has a lot of potential. Chapters are also around 2k words so it's almost like your reading a contracted novel. That's how good it is. Take the time out of your day and read this. You won't regret it.
Going by the latest chapter, Pros: Author has high readability, good sentence variation. Passive voice is kept low. Cons: 12 long sentences found in latest chapter. 10 (30-39), 2 (40+) and author has a tendency to overuse words such as WAS. I would recommend readers to take a look, all the best!